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You're The Poetry Of Me (poet devine's challenge)
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You're The Poetry Of Me (poet devine's challenge) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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You're The Poetry Of Me We are piece to puzzle of love meant to be, you are my fated home in your eyes, I see me ~ My very life is yours to mesh with your impassion you dress my cheeks with kisses flushed with heaven's fashion ~ Diamond glints of cloud romance the swirls of sky tracing curves of skin to leap on lullaby ~ You cool a summer's breeze igniting passion's fire escaping into you with destiny's desire ~ We dance an ageless sway 'neath the moon of toffee cream strokes of light penetrate this now enraptured dream ~ You brush against my soul in uplifting reverie, and, I bask in afterglow, lips breathe eternity ~ Whenever, forever... Camelot is ours you're the heart of my heart - my stairway to the stars ~ You're the poetry of me, you are my everything, I bow before the throne of love for you, my only king By Melissa P. Monette |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
This is by far the best poem, I've read in about 3 months...I'd bet it would sound good with music..Well, just me...Keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing... Brian, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yay!!!! Melissa the honeybee has returned! You write the cooolest love poetry. I hope to capture the same muse some day.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- Good to see you again. This is absolutely gorgeous! I love it! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
**** ABSOLUTELY STUNNING !!! **** mutington/joyce |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh I do love this....challenge met!! And into my library.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa, this is a keeper for sure. You came back and challenged the foe and won in resounding victory. Way to go! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Ms. Honeybee: These words are absolutely beautiful: "You're the poetry of me, you are my everything, I bow before the throne of love for you, my only king" Challenge met - Great Job! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We dance an ageless sway 'neath the moon of toffee cream strokes of light penetrate this now enraptured dream ~ You brush against my soul in uplifting reverie, and, I bask in afterglow, lips breathe eternity =============================== YOU are romantic poetry...(and imagery) (and cadence) this is wonderful and so is seeing you posting again. Happy New Year sweet Melis When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Who could resist these words of bliss. *L* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem is absolutely amazing. You have capture such love and devotion in every word and written it in such a way that it sings to the heart. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
EXCEPTIONAL!!!! Great poetics, here. Enjoyed reading this. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Melissa, you're sooooooo romantic, this is a timeless gem of true love through your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You brush against my soul in uplifting reverie, and, I bask in afterglow, lips breathe eternity" your poetry is so fluid.....this is so beautiful Melissa |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is lovely, Melissa!  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Hiya chickiegal I didn't want to read to many of these challange answers until I finished mine.. but I had to stop in I havent seen anything from you in awhile.. I hope to see more soon. *hugs*And I liked the poem.. I love your way with words Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Melissa - just beautiful, liked it a lot... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
again, the Queen of Romance pens another heartfelt and utterly beautiful poem. . . wonderful Melissa. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Melissa, Happy New Year! This is a beautiful poem, sounds like a wonderful romance, if only it is true. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a pleasant surprise, I didn't expect this many replies - thanks so much, everyone! Each one of your replies is very appreciated, as always thank you for your support  This was a great challenge!~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but this was a luverly one indeed! You met that challenge with your muse tied me thinks! LOL - and also laughing at Hallucination (you know me - anything sounds better if put to music!)  I miss my tunes! This was just great and glad you sent it to me, now I will stay in and read. Happy New Year. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, this is gorgeous. You write love so well, with such depth of feeling and such beautiful flow of words. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa! Hey, great to see you posting again! This is wonderful and oh so romantic! *Happy New Year to you and yours* *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
A poetic masterpiece. Job well done. Thanks Melton I wish you and yours the best of the new year. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, This love drenched work sings volumes to this heart. So sweet the vision you've crafted here, WRITE ON SWEET MELISSA! Peace unto you, Dennis :^) |
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