Open Poetry #17 |
One Thousand Years |
thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
One thousand years becomes one day One last hurrah, one last hooray We live our life by what we know This passing time should help us grow God watches us along our route To see if we live by our truth Some die too young, we all agree But what we are, is all we see We're judged by time spent in each day To help or hurt, it's all our way We can't control a thousand years But faith and love can fold our fears This life we live is made of choice Rise up first day, to just rejoice You'll love some words which sound so dear 'Good will to all, happy new year' And now I'll say farewell to all Please frame this work, our curtain call |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Please frame this work, our curtain call." You know, Roger, one of the nicest birthday presents I got this year was a framed poem from a very dear friend...and how well this suits the thought...thank you for sharing! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely wishes, nice thoughts. Best wishes to you dear poet. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Have a Happy New Year! I enjoyed reading this one, it's right on the mark. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! God Bless Us all and may we all embrace the new year with cheer and hope and utmost love! (big huggsssssssss) I LOVE IT!!! May we all embrace together in the curtain call and take a bow on a Year Of Hope! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
What a great poem! It flowed so well, and the last stanza was great. (which i know you have been hearing frequently but trust me it is the truth) Great job, to the library it goes! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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