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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Daffodil By: Noah Eaton 12/29/01 Sweet daffodil Of your eyes Facilitating the winds Hearing what only the rainbows can direct Sweet daffodil Troubadour of my heart Hail to the angels And lead me to heavens gate Your eyes are Mesmerizing Romanticizing Fantasizing Petrifying Laced in latex Lathered in satin Resting on your laurels My sweet silk maiden Her lemonade afterglow Her maraschino cherry smile Seducing me to her charms This facsimlle of a dream becomes worth while Tonight the moon is like a sedan chair Let destiny carry us through these seasons Upon this recumbent meadow of daffodils Where in your shamrock bed I find loves reasons Sweet daffodil Recite your golden cello And kiss me softly in this maple spring My sweet meadow soprano... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-29-2001 09:10 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - after reading this and others that you have written, I find you to have a very beautiful and warm heart. Just keep writing... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, beautiful write, beautiful sentiment Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
There is an abundance of love and caring and observance in your words. Such a fine poem from an extremely talented writer. Happy New Year and God be with you always. Roger |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah~If only others could see the world through your eyes! This is extremely beautiful! Hugs, Nancy *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Good work Noah! You are such a romantic. Happy New years! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Wonderful thoughts Noah  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Noah, This was so beautiful! But that is exactly what I've come to expect of your work. Just lovely work! I have missed reading your poetry. So glad I got to read some today. Take care hon. Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have" [This message has been edited by Aimster (12-30-2001 03:07 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
not to echo everyone else, but this is truly wonderful. You write with such great imagery, I can always feel and see what you are writing about! xoxoxo RP |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Sweet daffodil Troubadour of my heart Hail to the angels And lead me to heavens gate As a youngster, the daffodil inspired many dreams for me. Wonderful poem, Noah. Mike |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Another beautiful, romantic write. Nicely done. Dave |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
could almost drink this rather that read it-- nicely done There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have a distinct talent for painting with words, Noah, and I hope you never stop writing. You will have a treasure chest of verses from your heart at a young age. THis is very beautiful Liz |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
DAFFODILS...I LOVED IT, NOAH. Superb writing, once again. WONDERFUL POETICS!!!! ****Ivy Rose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Daffodils are one of my favorite flowers, Noah and this is an exquisite poem. Full of romantic imagery and so well written. Have a great New Year.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, Noah, How on earth do you find the words? This is beyond anything I've ever read! Just beautiful! I love it! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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