Open Poetry #17 |
Coming Home |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coming Home The sun has fallen round and ripe, turned the sky to olive and pimento, then gone to pot liquor, now chilled in the fabric of cold hands lighting fires from the yards of summer, the neighborhood takes on the fragrance of burning wood, apple, cedar, pine. The lane is lit and swaths the gardens in magic, and I can hear the piano although no one plays it. The sounds from the kitchen are music, the knife cuts a perfect note and the glass and silverware sing. So tender is the love that surrounds, as a fragile paw clicks across the tile I breathe in my lingering chaos and blow it out where it disappears into the opening where love abides, and this is coming home. ______ from Dec 00 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you for the trip home, Martie! Just what I needed tonight! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You do have a way with words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So tender is the love that surrounds, as a fragile paw clicks across the tile I breathe in my lingering chaos and blow it out where it disappears into the opening where love abides, and this is coming home. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love it Martie!! Just love it! Thank you for this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Home is where the heart is indeed, and it is such a lovely feeling to feel laughter and cheer all throughout the season in the house. (kiss on cheek) Your words always sing in symphony, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Ah! You make it sound so inviting to come into your home. I loved it. Roger |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like a wonderful place, Martie. I'm sure you would settle for nothing less.... |
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