Open Poetry #17 |
Seasons Of Change |
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seasons Of Change Dreamily, I look out my frosted window. The crystalline snow gleams on a cold wintry day. As chapels soft, echoing bells linger in the valley. Luminous icicles hang from roof tops, Dripping drops of water. As the sun threatens to destroy beauty. Which should be frozen in time. Light trickles through the clouds. And so begins, the journey to destruction. Yet, under all this ice and snow, The earth still breathes. And days follow with brilliant sun. Spring reappears and brings with it, New life, new hope, new beginnings. Buds open up to a new life. And blooms gently turn their faces towards the sun. Trees burst forth their new leaves of golden green. And grass revives lush and thick. This universe. Such wonders to behold. Floria Copyright ©2001 [This message has been edited by strbbux (12-29-2001 01:50 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
STANDING OVATION!!! The visions you paint with your words are stunning. I love seeing through your eyes the magic and feeling the wonder of this poem. BRAVO!!**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
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Oh thank you so very much. That was exactly what I was trying to achieve. You have made my day..((hugs)) strbbux |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yet, under all this ice and snow, The earth still breathes. And days follow with brilliant sun. =================================== this is indeed lovely....wonderful employ of imagery...youve painted us a vision of the seasons in their glorious cycles of ever changing constantcy. very well done Happy New Year jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is gorgeous, you do paint a vivid picture for us! I like this very much |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice, enjoyed muchly. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh, wow, this is a piece for the library... the images that you paint with these words are breathtaking! *click* Straight into the library with this talent... --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Janet Marie,Thank you so very much for your comments... I so appreciate it. Floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you so much SEA, I so appreciate any feedback. We never know enough it seems. flora ( strbbux) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you Tim.. so happy you enjoyed it. floria ( strbbux ) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Fading Away,Thanks so much for the input, it is people like all of you here that keep me going.. Floria ( strbbux) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Strbbux- What a beautiful masterpiece you've painted with your words...wonderful imagery. Really enjoyed this lovely write. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love the way you paint the changing of the seasons.Great imagery that pulls me in. peaches |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you vicky,I am so happy you enjoyed this. And thanks for replying. floria |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Thank you peaches, for replying. I am happy you liked this piece. floria |
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