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Open Poetry #17
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LADY LYON
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since 2001-06-22
Posts 12
CA, USA
0 posted 2001-12-29 10:36 AM

The unnamed of my love
quickly overwhelms
my patchouli

the smell lingers

I am wanting air
and he

laughs


"Don't take the blue pill..."
© Copyright 2001 YAEL LYON ERICKSON - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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1 posted 2001-12-29 11:05 AM

An extremely interesting poem. It seems that he is not giving what is needed. I will be pondering this one. Well written. **Hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-12-29 01:22 PM

This is good write, should go in uor "20 or less" hall of fame.
Sandra
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