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The Sounds Of My heart
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The Sounds Of My heart |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
In the mystery of the early morning Before the first yawning Huddled in a room alone, but with me I search for a reason to begin the day Fresh from a long night of deep thoughts I wash the sweat from my weakened face Staring at the misery that is now me The signs of and traces of my yesterday The sun has risen, and in the distance Lies a tomorrow I need to find, my peace Climbing back along the hills of my sorrows I wish not witness memories of bad tomorrows I will walk again amidst pain and sadness But I know now how the music goes Because life's lyrics asks for melodies That can only be heard in harmonies Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (12-28-2001 09:02 PM).] |
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LadyShadowWalker Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 15Minnesota, USA |
I was reading this while listening to the Top Gun theme on my pc, and the music enhanced the poem quite a bit. It was kinda cool. You've done a great job! Keep up the good work. --Lady where rabbits and deer play, where hearts run free, that is where I am. Second star to the right and straight on 'till morning...... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
funny, I am listening to George Winston's version of "the dance" by Garth Brooks, ( GW is piano music, no vocals) and that went very well with this  I like this very much |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Daniel, if you need a friend, please feel free to email me ok? This really got to me. I have been in this place and hope this is just a "muse". I'm going to be away for a few days and I just read this and had to respond. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is so beautifully written, but with such painful sad imagery of loneliness. This was particularly outstanding, and profoundly true for most people: "But I know now how the music goes Because life's lyrics asks for melodies That can only be heard in harmonies" This struck a very deep chord. I hope the new year will bring you peace and harmony. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Daniel..hope the new year brings you lots of happiness and joy.. ~Victoria~ |
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