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Dear love (The challenge)
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Dear love (The challenge) |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Dear love I hope that you never lose hope Love again for we all must but never forget that my love will always remain true to itself But most of all some time remember our first night together where love delighted in the glory of our passion erasing all past lovers and carving in our hearts what cannot be forgotten [This message has been edited by walker (12-28-2001 08:26 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) May the love of your life forever bring you happiness, sweet friend, this is sheer beauty! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Beautiful indeed! I always look forward to seeing your poetry on these blue pages! RP |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"where love delighted in the glory of our passion erasing all past lovers and carving in our hearts what cannot be forgotten" *sigh* love this  Challenge well met!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well done! But this makes me feel sad for some reason. Remembering the love means that it's not in the our present. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Absolutely gorgeous! I will be back to read this one again...wow. Reminded me of those "secret smiles" that makes one wonder what someone is thinking about! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
But most of all some time remember our first night together where love delighted in the glory of our passion erasing all past lovers and carving in our hearts what cannot be forgotten ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is truly beautiful! Enjoyed! Hugs, Nancy *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker. Sad write...but wonderful. I like the ending lines.. the one everyone else quoted  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Indeed, I believe we all want to be remembered in the hearts of those we have shared love with. This is a beautiful way of expressing that want. |
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