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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-12-28 07:04 PM


~ Reflections On My Year ~

I can’t believe another year has gone by so fast
It doesn’t seem that long since I stood here last
The year has brought so much, both smiles and tears
But all in all it’s been one of the remarkable years
I started it with my heart lying in pieces on the floor
I thought I’d be chained, bound there for evermore
But with the help of my friends I gathered up me
And set about putting those pieces back carefully

Another year over, it doesn’t feel twelve months long
Since I was singing that Robbie Burns song
The year progressed I started to feel once again
Although I believe I will always remember the pain
But that is good it taught me what I needed to know
That sometimes love is more than a flashy glitter show
Usually if you can see love when he looks at you
Then you’ll know that this love is absolutely true

The year is fading fast now it’s almost completely gone
And I’ve learnt that eventually hearts do move on
That long lost love that I believed was truly true
It was nothing when I think of how I feel for you
I know now that the world is coloured in rainbow light
And I’m dressed from head to toe in sparkling starlight
Your words don’t need wrapping in smoky dreams lace
Just the words I love you set my heart speeding apace

A New Year and I wonder what it will bring to me
Will I continue in my life and love quite happily?
I'll try to live each moment when it comes, no holding back
I’ll be cheerful and not moan about whatever I lack
The sun will shine on me and yes the rain will fall
And I will relish my life and will heed loves call
I thank HIM for giving me the trials and also the tears
For it is they which equip me for the coming years


Marsha

Happy New Year


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1



[This message has been edited by Marsha (12-28-2001 07:07 PM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-28 07:07 PM




YAY!!! (big hugggsssssss) Oh Marsha, I'm so ahppy to hear you saying this, for you deserve the greatest love and happiness forever, and we all wish you the greatest love forever after! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, and wish you the happiest New Year! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-28 07:11 PM


Mushy, no matter the year, you sparkle Happy New Year to you too!!
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3 posted 2001-12-28 10:14 PM


Happy New Year to you, Marsha...
and may 2002 grant you your hearts desires.
Beautifully written!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2001-12-28 11:34 PM


Marsha,
I was going to say you sparkle but I guess that's the light reflecting off your sequined dress. But this poem sparkles with all your wit and wisdom.

Happy new Year, may it be as dazzling as you.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2001-12-28 11:56 PM


Marsha!  Excellent write and a very Happy New Year to you as well!  
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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6 posted 2001-12-29 12:08 PM


Sounds like you had a full year, mushy....and ending on a happier note than the beginning. That's a GOOD thing!

May the new year bring you everything good...you deserve it, sweet lady

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7 posted 2001-12-29 10:21 AM


Marsha,a wonderful poem by a wonderful friend.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!


Juanita

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[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (12-29-2001 11:01 AM).]

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8 posted 2001-12-29 11:01 AM


Martha,,, same to you..HAPPY NEW YEAR.....AND BEST OF EVERYTHING TO YOU...strbbux
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9 posted 2001-12-29 12:10 PM


HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO MARSHA....it seems the older I get the faster the year goes. Scary thought. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2001-12-29 01:02 PM


Yes, you certainly are sparkling aren’t you? It certainly sounds like it has been a wonderful year for you. There’s nothing like a new love to put all the pieces of a heartbreak back together again is there? Best wishes for you for the new year. May it be your most wonderful yet.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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11 posted 2001-12-29 01:05 PM


This is a beautiful... yes, it is amazing to think that another year has gone by.  They seem to go by quicker with each passing year, eh?  Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and thanks for the blessing.
Happy New Year to you too, Marsha

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

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12 posted 2001-12-29 01:34 PM


This is so nice, Marsha, to see the change you went through over the year, and come out happy at the end of it.
Happy New Year
Sandra

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I trust the new year will be filled with love and happiness for you, take care!
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Marsha, the only thing better than wishing you a Happy New Year would be to meet you in person and then we would make it so! Sun

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15 posted 2001-12-30 03:36 PM


Marsha - Happy New Year to you too.  I can't believe someone would break your precious heart, but I am glad to see it is all back together now.

Dave

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16 posted 2001-12-30 05:30 PM


Marsha - a telling poem about your year. May the new one be filled with the grace of you, and that special someone...

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU!!!!

BC

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17 posted 2002-01-02 11:02 PM


Noah darling boy, thank you love. love and life all continue. Sometimes we forget that. May your year be filled with love and dreams too.

:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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18 posted 2002-01-02 11:08 PM


Circe darling girl thank you, do you know my year has been blessed by having friends like you.
Take care of yourself darling girl, for you are special

My year will always shine when I have friends and family who are as loving and giving as you. Thank you darling girl


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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19 posted 2002-01-02 11:11 PM


Lyra darling girl thank you muchly, YOU are a blessing to me. Always encouraging.
I thank you for always being where you're needed

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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20 posted 2002-01-02 11:19 PM


Keth darling sister of my soul, what would I have done without you darling girl. I know we play a dueling game here darling but I want to take the chance to say YOU are a fabulous sister of heart darling No one knows how much you mean to me, but maybe they have an idea.
Without you dearest Keth I would have stayed down I think. It was certainly you who held my hand and stood me up again. The sparkle you see darling one is the reflection of the stars in your eyes. YOU always are biased and I love you for it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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21 posted 2002-01-02 11:22 PM


Nancy thank you muchly may your year be awash with love light and delight.

Take care of your heart and never give up your wonderful way of always smiling.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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22 posted 2002-01-02 11:30 PM


'Deer dear heart thank you, you have added to the fun this year has been. Your poetry has kept me hugely entertained, when I haven't been laughing I've been sobbing. Now that is the mark of a true poet. Someone who involves his readers, who carries them with them throughout his stories. Thank you for them they have been magical
If anyone deserves a wonderful year it is you, and may you get all you wish.



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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23 posted 2002-01-02 11:36 PM


Juanita darling girl, thank you so muchly. And You too darling girl may your year be as wonderful for you as it could possibly be. YOU are a fabulous friend, and a terrific poet, I should be as Green as they come but how could I be you are too wonderful a person to be jealous of.
Take care of you dearest friend you are one of those special people who light the world

:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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24 posted 2002-01-02 11:38 PM


Strbbux Thank you muchly happy new year to you may it be full od joy and happiness for you

:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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25 posted 2002-01-02 11:40 PM


Karen thank you so very much YOU are one of lifes shining stars. You are always encouraging and delightful may you always shine on. I hope you have a wonderful year

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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26 posted 2002-01-02 11:51 PM


Tracey thank you darling girl, yes I'm sparkling, it's the reflection of all the love that is sent to me. I don't deserve it but oh it's wonderful nevertheless. May your year be  

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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27 posted 2002-01-02 11:54 PM


Marie thank you so much, i hope your year is wonderful and I hope your wishes all come true

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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28 posted 2002-01-03 12:23 PM


Sandra thank you love the year will be wonderful. And so will yours full to the brim with good things
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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29 posted 2002-01-03 12:28 PM


Eagle one thank you so very much.

I hope you have a wonderful year too

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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30 posted 2002-01-03 12:33 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart, I'll be there this year, that's a promise. And even if you can't come and sit in my gazebo and drink tea I shall get within your orbit somehow.

Until then darling girl shine on YOU are the SUN

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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I can't believe how fast this year has gone either!  I'm glad that this year has gone good for you.  Your poem was very good.  I enjoyed reading it!  Happy New Year!!!


Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

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32 posted 2002-01-03 12:52 PM


Dave darling boy, well a lot of water has passed under the brigde kid. I could say a lot about it but I won't. Don't go looking back kid, learn from your mistakes and move on that's what I say.

I have moved on, and as for you darling boy I hope your year positively glistens with delight and shines with love. YOU deserve it



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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33 posted 2002-01-03 12:55 PM


        



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

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