An Eternity Of Love....(I'm trying to write)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-28 12:40 PM

I thought of you this morning.
I could not help but to do that.
Why? Because of who you are.
Who you are to me in my life.

Memories...some great ones...
I shall always have them.
I won’t let them diminish or fade.
They are part of me, of you...

Without you, I feel alone.
With you...I have all I need.
Stay with me in our world.
Love me as I do so love you.

Let your dreams be of us
For I do wish them be true.
And as I rest beside you...
Let my dreams be of you...

You know when I am sad.
My silence speaks ever loud.
My eyes, the sparkle dimming
show the feelings I have.

I have loved you since that moment.
The first time I saw, heard, smelled you.
I want to always have that...
An eternity of life is all I ask.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-28 12:43 PM

TRY?

oh, this is so romantic....

please, keep trying and I'll keep sighing

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-28 12:45 PM

Barry, whatever you're doing keep it up! This is fabulous!

I am/Kathleen/

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-12-28 12:47 PM

Writing in the morning usually works for me too..enjoyed Magnus..lovely thoughts..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-12-28 12:49 PM

Magnus,
An eternity of love, Why not. Enjoyed.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2001-12-28 01:43 PM

Barry,

You did very well.. this is soooo romantic

I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

6 posted 2001-12-28 04:40 PM

Keep those romantic hits coming!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-28 04:50 PM

....sigh....

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

8 posted 2001-12-28 04:58 PM

Whatever you do, please keep writing. Your feelings and emotions are written in each word. This piece is really very good. It is a keeper.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-12-28 05:41 PM

Sue...I am...I really am...It is just very
hard right now...Thanx..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-12-28 05:42 PM

Kay...it is taking all of my inner strength..
but I am writing...Thank you very much.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-12-28 05:43 PM

Thank You Victoria...she deserves these
thoughts...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-28 05:44 PM

Seymour, always enjoy your comment...Thank
You..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-12-28 05:45 PM

Tara...you are an ever faithful reader of
my words...I am grateful for that..Thanx..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-12-28 05:46 PM

Domzi...I am trying very hard to do just
that...thank you...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2001-12-28 05:47 PM

Nancy...again and again...you always are
there to make a kind remark or gesture..
Thank You...They mean a lot right now..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-12-28 05:48 PM

Ariana...thats just how I am...the way I
write..Happy that you enjoyed this poem..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2001-12-28 06:05 PM

(smiles) Yes, with your loving heart, always listen to it and try and you are bound to smile with eternal love ever after! (big hugggsssss) Your talent always amazes me, sweet friend, you are a true inspiration to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-12-28 06:08 PM

Noah...IF God gives an award for the warmth
of poetic comments...you most assuredly
will win...Thank You...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

19 posted 2001-12-29 12:05 PM

*sigh* this touches the heart. If this is just trying then I want more of it. Absolutely stunning, Barry.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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