Open Poetry #17 |
Two Hearts Smiling, A Joyful Ride |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Together into the winds of love Two ride as one upon a lover’s steed Guided only by the stars above Filling within each their every need. Two souls journey down a path sure as their racing hearts pound and endure Those moments shared as each sighed while away into the heavens they ride. Lost upon a moment of erotic bliss taking from each with a long kiss. Keeping time to a love making tune making a woman soulfully swoon. And as they settle in the other’s arms still dreaming of sighs and charms Eyes closing into a restful sleep Till once again two lover’s reap. Whewwwwwww, what a day.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WoW!!! Magnus! Are you not plum tuckered out yet? Is the birthday girl tired at all? Loved this one...I sure did!! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
NOPE...she isn't...and I am holding my own. getting ready to go have dinner and movie.. Her day...I want her to remember this one for a very long time... thanx Nancy. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow,this is better than ever, and I like all of your poems. It sounds like a very happy day, good for you to want her to have a memorable day. I'm sure you have succeeded. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was wonderfully written, Magnus. Sounds like you are both having a great day. All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* sounds like your day is a huge success. Very well done, Magnus. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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