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It Rains.....
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It Rains..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It rains ever on the beaches of my heart the sky remains low dark and brooding offering its waters to mingle with mine even if only one drop at a time……  It rains drops of emotion as the sky pretends not to notice that I accept it in dance in song worshiping…… ~SEA~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God, this is so beautiful! (I'm confused, I didn't think we were allowed to put graphics anymore) This is my favorite from you, I love lighthouses! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Extremely beautiful and tender write Sea. Just lovely! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rose, I think we are just supposed to be a little more selective when we put them on, instead of on every single post, at least that is how I understood it, if I'm wrong, I'll take it off  Donna, thank you! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes we cant be greedy with Gods love..his light peeks through on the darkest of days..beautifully done Sea.. ~Victoria~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, that makes sense!!! Thank you, it adds to the poem so wonderfully. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the sky remains low dark and brooding offering its waters to mingle with mine even if only one drop at a time…… ================================= very cool image and stir of emotions Sea-girlie. and yes we can still use graphics,as Sue said..with discretion, but Ron explained the need for them to be a certain size, the smaller the better for loading purposes. When your own emptiness is all thats getting through, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
God this is beautiful Susan! AND...I spend a lot of time in the summer tracking down old lighthouses....love them! Hugs. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, It was like catching a breeze from the sea. Excellent. *L* |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
'sky pretends not to notice' - refreshing read. thanks |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...beautiful words and awesome graphics to go with it...enjoyed... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (smiles) You are an angel to us all and His song of love echoes in your verse! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love the graphic too! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written, Susan...and yes, your stom is just beginning here, or maybe it's a different storm. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much, your warm replies make big smiles for me, and Martie, I think it's the same storm...LOL looks like we have it for the weekend.  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love it! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
An absolutely gorgeous poem, Sue..... I am also a lover of storms, and have done lots of sailing on Lake Michigan where they are very dramatic.....especially if you get caught in one. "It rains drops of emotion as the sky pretends not to notice" I especially loved those lines.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Kudos!!! (stands and claps in a singular ovation) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- This is a gorgeous and heart-tugging write. Wonderfully penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, this is so sparkling and tempestuous, I love it when you write in water signs. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have found that when you write your heart? You sing... This is a beautiful poem here, SEA...you're doing Mom quite proud... |
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