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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Editor but, he does not dance with me in angry circles red no steps shredding my thoughts enticing me to think instead can not mince his words trying to impress me with glamour knowing I have vocabulary just not the rules of grammar can’t help but write my emotions sometimes they run asunder slows me back to written reality calls me… a wonder edits me to teach me changing my art in the practice of my poetry my best interest is in his heart "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the dance of the editor and writer is a difficult one, but if nurtured can work well in the interests of both.  wishing you success in your work. Nice write. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, I suppose that's what editors are for, huh? But I like your style!  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmm. Yes this is nice, i like it i like it good work good work |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Helen - You've let an editor into your life? What were you thinking, woman?!!! Get him (or her) out of there, quick! I do like your poem. Please don't edit it. Hugs |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The editing is always the choice of the artist. Well said, Helen. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
very unique form and style. Enjoyed the read. thanks. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I enjoyed this read...Those editors...gotta keep an eye on them... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, I really, really like this Helen...one of your best me thinks. jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - your writing is exquisite, and this is one of the best... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Helen, I really enjoyed this one...love the form. hugs. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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