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My New Year Wish
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My New Year Wish |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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It is my greatest desire For this brand new year To become as good as you Whenever I write what I do I always try to do my best It seems like such a test My mind goes blank you see Words just don't come to me Still I try to write like you Hoping it is as good, too Better late than never Even though I'm not clever © By Sue 12-27-01 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
smartchick, don't you DARE put yourself down! You sit down with a blank sheet of paper and you come up with your own ideas and you work hard to put them down in poetic form. That gets you all the respect in the world in my book. I have a feeling you will continue to improve because you have the desire to...that's all one needs. You keep writing....we'll keep reading  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Balladeer! Thank you so much, for your kind words. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, I hope this doesn't make you blue, But I have some words just for you. This looks like last years post, Not that this year you would boast. But I surely think that you should know, All of those things have happened so; This must be some kind of mistake, Please say it's so for my sake! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sue, this is cute..and silly. You are already a fine poet. Happy New Year Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Girl, don't be silly, you are a fine poet and even the best of the best can use improvement! Happy new year, Good things are in store for you! RP |
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