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LadyShadowWalker
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since 2001-12-27
Posts 15
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2001-12-27 09:14 PM


Out Of The Shadows

Out of the shadows
and into the light
to greet the sun
that has been lost in the night

to see what has been lost
for such a long time
to the shadows and fog

Out of the shadows
with scars on my heart
here in my world
the walls are falling down
the chains are being released
and I'm ready to fly

Out of the shadows
I was given the name,
the chance to walk
on both sides of the light
in dark,
in sun,
out the shadows
came the light

Here I am.
Shadow Walker
Free as a bird
with love,
freedom, light,and
knowledge

© Copyright 2001 LadyShadowWalker - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-12-27 09:21 PM



Wonderful First Post!
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-27 10:58 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I'm sitting here in candlelight so I can kind of relate to your thoughts!  

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-12-28 12:30 PM


Welcome, to a place where many shadows dance and play with imagery and rhyme each and every day.
"the chains are being released
and I'm ready to fly"
It feels good to be released, doesn't it?

The Rusty Knight
Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
4 posted 2001-12-28 12:42 PM


Welcome to the "light" blue pages of passions.  I enjoyed your first post and look forward to many more.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2001-12-28 01:28 AM


WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME!!!!!
Much talent in you Yoda sees. A great poet you are, yes, yes

NWANGLER
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since 2001-12-28
Posts 1

6 posted 2001-12-28 06:14 AM


I feel a little pain from the past and at the same time I feel a bit of rolaids..(that was a joke)..get it?
Welcome to PIP.

LadyShadowWalker
Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 15
Minnesota, USA
7 posted 2001-12-28 08:39 AM


Thank you all for your very kind replies. I appreciate the warm welcome. :-)

-Lady

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
8 posted 2001-12-28 08:47 AM


Lady - Welcome to Passions.  Your poem has so much hope written into it.  Very nicely written.

Since I am a gentleman, I must warn you, there are scalawags (also called balladeers - heh) in here who prey on the sweet sensitivites of the women poets.  DO NOT TRUST THESE NEER-DO-WELLS!!!  Trust only me.  If you have secret fantasies, remember, you may wake up with amnesia, so tell me all of them so I can remind you later.  OK?  I will not tell a single soul (well, maybe a couple of souls, but no more than five or six or so).  My secret email address is LongJohnTellsAll@PsychicFriends.net.

BTW - I really like your poem.

Seriously...  There are many wondeful poets in these forums who will open their arms to you.  I have met so many wonderful people here.  Welcome home.

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2001-12-28 09:00 AM


Welcome to our wonderful and wacky home. We hope you'll enjoy your stay here. Beware the pirates and the balladeers for they will steal your heart and make you smile all at the same time!!! Please check your email for a special greeting.
Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
10 posted 2001-12-28 05:23 PM


Welcome LadyShadowWalker
You wrote a beautiful poem

But...don't you believe that fello' Long John dear, AND DON'T TELL HIM ANY SECRET FANTASIES EITHER you hear

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
11 posted 2001-12-28 06:12 PM


LadyS.W.....hope you don't mind me doing
that...

Very mystical and interesting opening poem.
Enjoyed...And as always....welcome to
Passions...this is a warm place to poetically
grow...

LadyShadowWalker
Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 15
Minnesota, USA
12 posted 2001-12-28 06:25 PM


Just call me Lady.. Thank you for your kind reply Magnus
Mistletoe Angel
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Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
13 posted 2001-12-28 07:11 PM




(smiles) Oh Lady, yes you are, and may your loving heart forever shine with freedom and love and happiness! Your beautiful debut shines with the magic of joy, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggssssss) Welcome to Passions, sweet Lady, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lady, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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