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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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0 posted 2001-12-27 07:59 PM





Lets have a good time with the words that create a beautiful country.

Come join me in my write
Let your words intertwine with mine
In the beauty of the English language
Lets dance with the phrases
That will raise our spirit so high
That the readers will sing out
And the words will spread like a virus
That will affect the heart’s emotion
To feel in between the words
In images so real
That all the fantasies will smile
Among us in their creativity
Of the joining of words
From the walks of all people
Into the greatest constitution
That will create the merging of magic
Blending of our great land
Into the inner smile of our majesty
Flying our flag
In the spirit of the eagle’s flight

It would be fun to have one stanza from each our great poets into a merging of a masterpiece. At the end each would be identified as to the originator. Just a wild dream, I guess.

D.Lester Young (12/27/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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1 posted 2001-12-27 09:00 PM


a challenge then??
well you start it, and the rest will tag along, I'm sure it is a beautiful idea

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2 posted 2001-12-27 09:33 PM


D.,
A bold adventure. Lead on!

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3 posted 2001-12-27 09:51 PM




YAY!!! A challenge! I would be so honored to join along, and may we all together interweave the colors of love and freedom through verse! (big hugggssssss) I love the idea, sweet friend! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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