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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-27 06:13 PM


When your day has become your hell
and each moment doesn’t feel well.
What do you do to once more smile
as you again walk this lonely mile.

My path takes me to unseen lands.
To the distant mountains and sands.
Helping me again see through trees
for now I am desperate..on my knees.

My words which I sadly pen on page
are not of joy, love, peace or rage.
For now I feel little to pen or write.
My mind feels lost in darkest night.

I feel that I must take a short rest
and maybe just sit back for the best.
For my pen, though full of dark ink
isn’t helping me much now to think.


I'm just gonna chill for a little while..

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-27 06:19 PM


I have some ice cubes.....
will that help???
I mean, get you back here faster?!
We'll be here waiting for you....


Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-27 06:43 PM


I pray you have the strength and fortitude to do just that, for I, have not been able to.  But I understand this completely.

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

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3 posted 2001-12-27 06:46 PM


My words which I sadly pen on page
are not of joy, love, peace or rage.
For now I feel little to pen or write.
My mind feels lost in darkest night.


I feel that I must take a short rest
and maybe just sit back for the best.
For my pen, though full of dark ink
isn’t helping me much now to think.

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you have no idea how dead on this reflection is...I just now sent an email to a friend telling her if this writers block dont pass soon Im going to take a break from even trying to write......then I come in here and find this...
sometimes there just arent the words....
thank you for saying poetically what I cant seem to be able to anymore....
may you find your voice in the silence...
chill on poet sir *s*
take care
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


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4 posted 2001-12-27 07:46 PM


Barry,

     I hope you return to us soon, I love your words. Take care..

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2001-12-27 09:13 PM


Barry, Boy do I know this feeling.  You sit...pen in hand and the words just won't come...awful feeling.  Kick back and relax...we'll be here waiting for you....
with a hot coffee, a smile and a hug, Nancy.

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

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6 posted 2001-12-27 09:57 PM




(sigh) We all understand how you feel, sweet friend, we all have writers block every once in a while, and I too experience this every now and then! (big hugggssssss) Just relax and capture each thought when it comes to you! (smiles) Sooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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