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D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2001-12-27 01:57 AM

A quick expression of hope that carries me on in life.

Oh readers of delight
Come join me on my ride
Let the rise of my emotions within
Rise with the joy of words
That will brighten any day

Then take me down into my depressions
That will darken spirits into bottomless pits
Ride the roller coaster of life within the words
That storm out passions
That will electrify your eyes
Into the thoughts to create goose bumps of chills
To the heated words that spell a little of hell

Let the spirit rise to find the paths of mystery
That will create new worlds within your mind
Let the senses create aromas that words can smell with
Let words float you among the angels of song
And then ride you down the whirlwinds
Of cyclones of wild thoughts
Let the waterfalls cleanse your spirit in the colors of living
In the rainbows that sparkle in pots of gold

Let me create for you
My dream world of fantasies
That keeps me wrapped up in my thoughts
That may someday make me a writer
That will be blessed with an audience
That floats in the space of worlds
Creating images so pure
That they are carried in a place
That beats within their dreams
And is remembered
In that special place called the mind

D.Lester Young (12/26/01)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-27 09:18 AM

Ride the roller coaster of life within the words
That storm out passions
That will electrify your eyes
Into the thoughts to create goose bumps of chills
To the heated words that spell a little of hell

Let the spirit rise to find the paths of mystery
That will create new worlds within your mind
Let the senses create aromas that words can smell with
Let words float you among the angels of song
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all these things poets can create with their words...
this is a creative cool write...an inspirational piece.
very well done poet sir..
Happy New Year

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2001-12-30 04:00 AM

D.Lester-
Very cool write, indeed.
I much enjoyed this poetic ride.
Well said.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-30 12:11 PM

do you know what? I can feel your joy as you weave a spell with your words and give me a vision that makes me sigh with the magic of it. I LOVE THIS POEM. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-30 12:15 PM

(smiles) CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh my gosh, you are indeed a writer, and with your golden heart you always create a utopia within your mind that fills your spirit with hope and love! (smiles) I love your wisdom and words, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! God Bless You! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lester, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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