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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-12-26 07:57 AM

Repost Rewrite:

From out the mist

Out of the mist of time she came,
Without a notice, without a shame.
She strode upon the rhyme of gist.
In garments like the mornings mist.

She flowered in a wanton need.
Her face upturned and drank in greed.
Full of nectar and full of smell
And brought my passions up from hell.

She's a cauldron full of essence
And an angel in her presence.
She is the dove that turns to love
Let from heaven and stars above.

She's the blender and the tender,
Of my torments fires splender.
I cannot troll beyond her beach.
Nor can I move beyond her reach.

I catch each echo of her let,
By force of heart and passions net.
Cling to the ringing and the toll.
Here in the chambers of my soul.

What flagellation could I use
To calm the dragon of this muse?
To stop the process of consume
To build a physical immune.

I'd hover o'er the why of things.
If truly I had dragon wings?

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-12-26 08:04 AM

*WOW* Sey, this is awesome......speechless in awe. .....enjoyed it very....very .....much.

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-26 08:13 AM

Charisma,
Goog morning sweet. How was the holiday? Glad you enjoyed the fantasy. *L*

Nan

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Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2001-12-26 08:34 AM

Your fantasy's are superb, dear Sy... Standing under the mistletoe here..

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-12-26 08:42 AM

She strode upon the rhyme of gist.
In garments like the mornings mist.

She flowered in a wanton need.
Her face upturned and drank in greed.
Full of nectar and full of smell
And brought my passions up from hell.
=========================================
She's the blender and the tender,
Of my torments fires splender.
I cannot troll beyond her beach.
Nor can I move beyond her reach.
===========================================
What flagellation could I use
To calm the dragon of this muse?
To stop the process of consume
To build a physical immune.

I'd hover o'er the why of things.
If truly I had dragon wings?
====================================

Well lookie here...Randy is on the rise *L*
Randy my boy...where have you been??
its about time we had a roar from you. LOL

You know what I always say Stinky..."why ask why"
and trust me...your dragon does indeed fly

very very cool poem Sy-babes.(and Randy)

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2001-12-26 08:42 AM

I'm after Nan
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-12-26 09:12 AM

Man,
Well your first in line and Elizabeth is right behind. Love Sy

JM,
Sweet Tinkerbell, Randy draged out the mistletoe and there seems to be a line up. LOL Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky

Elizabeth,
I'll have to start giving out numbers. LOL
Love Sy

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-12-26 09:29 AM

Well then, put on your best pucker and go with the mistletoe flow *L*

I got me raspberry lip gloss on and Im getting in line...several times. LOL
*winkiewinkie*

Nan

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Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2001-12-26 09:36 AM

Sy - I hear that JM is doing raspberries... Watchout...

... Liz.. Stop pushing so hard..

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-12-26 09:49 AM

This made me think of medeival times for some reason. Beautifully enchanting poem.
What’s this I hear about kisses??? What? there’s a line-up??? Where do I join??...way back there?? That’s an awful long wait...specially since JM keeps jumping back in line!!! Lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-12-26 09:52 AM

Nan & JM
You gals are really something. I LOVE IT.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-12-26 09:54 AM

Tracey,
You get a special pass. LOL Love Sy

Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

12 posted 2001-12-26 10:21 AM

See what you and Randy started
better break out the chapstick *L*

Do you remember this kiss? *winkiewinkie*

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

13 posted 2001-12-26 10:31 AM

Excellent flow and rhyming scheme. The first lines of each stanza works very well.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2001-12-26 10:38 AM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is so dazzling, you always make such beautiful fantasies come to life with your wonderful words! (smiles) What a beautiful mistletoe expression, I love it! (big hugggsssss) I hope you had the most merriest Christmas! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

15 posted 2001-12-26 11:23 AM

Sey, I love this.Your words always entice me.I love the fantasy you protray here.And what's this I hear about kisses hmmmmmmm.
Peaches

P.S. This is one I'm going t keep.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2001-12-26 11:27 AM

I saw something flying in the sky
I think it was a dragon Sy

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

17 posted 2001-12-26 02:03 PM

Seymore,
I can only simply say, wow.............
This is truly fantastic.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

18 posted 2001-12-26 02:06 PM

well, I'm glad I spotted this one. What a write, I like this side of you, Seymour!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

19 posted 2001-12-26 02:23 PM

*giggling* I am at the end of the line but hoping to join you on such a sensual dragon flight as this one.....*sigh* absolutely magnificent. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nan

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

20 posted 2001-12-26 10:40 PM

All righty then... Raspberries to JM...

NEXT..??

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2001-12-26 11:57 PM

Opeth, Glad you enjoyed.

Noah, Did you put up the mistletoe? LOL

Peaches, thank you and this just from me. XXX

Martie, here are some Randy kiss for you. XXX

Whisper's, Thank you for the WOW.

Kathleen, Thank you and I'm sending some XXX for you. Sy

Startime, And here are some XXX's for you.

Nan, That's true you got me first. I completely forgot about this picture. Thank you so much for posting it.

JM, We'll have to take a picture like that with you on both sides of me. Love ya me.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

22 posted 2001-12-26 11:57 PM

Ok..that tears it ...

Randy has gone too far....he's writing checks his lips cant cash LOL

I'd hate to have to rip the lips of my fellow poetess's off in a Tinkerbell jealousy fit ROFL

AND HEY....I havent forgotten that picture Nan posted before of Balladeer and Long John smooching my Stinkys cheeks

Ya know...Im starting to see a pattern here LOL

OH Randy....you got some explaining to do

*winkiewinkie*

Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

23 posted 2001-12-26 11:59 PM

LOL @ Nan blowing me Raspberries

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

24 posted 2001-12-27 12:09 PM

JM,
LOL & ROTF
Randy is hiding, but he said to me before he left that you were his only Tinkerbell.
And I might add you are the cutest cleverest Tinkerbell I ever came across. Love Sy

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

25 posted 2001-12-27 01:45 AM

Oh....you two are SMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOTH LOL
Like I could get mad at you anyway

Tell Randy its safe now...I called off the gator girls...
he cant help it...that mistletoe is like raspberries...theres no turning back *L*

Nan

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26 posted 2001-12-27 10:40 AM

Kewl... We can have a group smooch...

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

27 posted 2001-12-27 09:21 PM

Jm & Nan,
Maybe some day we will. Really love you gals.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

28 posted 2001-12-30 08:02 AM

I can see why this was such a favorite...well done, our Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

29 posted 2001-12-30 09:03 AM

Sunshine,
Of course you are included in the group. *L*

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

30 posted 2001-12-30 03:21 PM

Sy,
Randy is dandy but Sy soars high. Wow!
These lines so etched in perfection... mirror me

She flowered in a wanton need.
Her face upturned and drank in greed.
Full of nectar and full of smell
And brought my passions up from hell.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

31 posted 2001-12-30 03:52 PM

WOW!!! How did I miss this??!!

Great poem, but, I was talking about the kisses~I'm here with fresh mistletoe and chapstick! ~Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

32 posted 2001-12-30 05:55 PM

Keth,
Glad you enjoyed and got to read ths.

Nancy,
With these kind of kisses you don't need chap stick. LOL *L*

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