Open Poetry #17 |
From Out the Mist |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost Rewrite: From out the mist Out of the mist of time she came, Without a notice, without a shame. She strode upon the rhyme of gist. In garments like the mornings mist. She flowered in a wanton need. Her face upturned and drank in greed. Full of nectar and full of smell And brought my passions up from hell. She's a cauldron full of essence And an angel in her presence. She is the dove that turns to love Let from heaven and stars above. She's the blender and the tender, Of my torments fires splender. I cannot troll beyond her beach. Nor can I move beyond her reach. I catch each echo of her let, By force of heart and passions net. Cling to the ringing and the toll. Here in the chambers of my soul. What flagellation could I use To calm the dragon of this muse? To stop the process of consume To build a physical immune. I'd hover o'er the why of things. If truly I had dragon wings? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* Sey, this is awesome......speechless in awe. .....enjoyed it very....very .....much. Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Goog morning sweet. How was the holiday? Glad you enjoyed the fantasy. *L* |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your fantasy's are superb, dear Sy... Standing under the mistletoe here.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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She strode upon the rhyme of gist. In garments like the mornings mist. She flowered in a wanton need. Her face upturned and drank in greed. Full of nectar and full of smell And brought my passions up from hell. ========================================= She's the blender and the tender, Of my torments fires splender. I cannot troll beyond her beach. Nor can I move beyond her reach. =========================================== What flagellation could I use To calm the dragon of this muse? To stop the process of consume To build a physical immune. I'd hover o'er the why of things. If truly I had dragon wings? ==================================== Well lookie here...Randy is on the rise *L* Randy my boy...where have you been?? its about time we had a roar from you. LOL You know what I always say Stinky..."why ask why" and trust me...your dragon does indeed fly very very cool poem Sy-babes.(and Randy) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'm after Nan Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Man, Well your first in line and Elizabeth is right behind. Love Sy JM, Sweet Tinkerbell, Randy draged out the mistletoe and there seems to be a line up. LOL Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Elizabeth, I'll have to start giving out numbers. LOL Love Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Well then, put on your best pucker and go with the mistletoe flow *L* I got me raspberry lip gloss on and Im getting in line...several times. LOL *winkiewinkie* |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - I hear that JM is doing raspberries... Watchout... ... Liz.. Stop pushing so hard.. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This made me think of medeival times for some reason. Beautifully enchanting poem. What’s this I hear about kisses??? What? there’s a line-up??? Where do I join??...way back there?? That’s an awful long wait...specially since JM keeps jumping back in line!!! Lol If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan & JM You gals are really something. I LOVE IT. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracey, You get a special pass. LOL Love Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
See what you and Randy started better break out the chapstick *L* Do you remember this kiss? *winkiewinkie* |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Excellent flow and rhyming scheme. The first lines of each stanza works very well. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is so dazzling, you always make such beautiful fantasies come to life with your wonderful words! (smiles) What a beautiful mistletoe expression, I love it! (big hugggsssss) I hope you had the most merriest Christmas! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sey, I love this.Your words always entice me.I love the fantasy you protray here.And what's this I hear about kisses hmmmmmmm. Peaches P.S. This is one I'm going t keep. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I saw something flying in the sky I think it was a dragon Sy |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Seymore, I can only simply say, wow............. This is truly fantastic. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, I'm glad I spotted this one. What a write, I like this side of you, Seymour! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I am at the end of the line but hoping to join you on such a sensual dragon flight as this one.....*sigh* absolutely magnificent. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nan
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All righty then... Raspberries to JM... NEXT..?? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Opeth, Glad you enjoyed. Noah, Did you put up the mistletoe? LOL Peaches, thank you and this just from me. XXX Martie, here are some Randy kiss for you. XXX Whisper's, Thank you for the WOW. Kathleen, Thank you and I'm sending some XXX for you. Sy Startime, And here are some XXX's for you. Nan, That's true you got me first. I completely forgot about this picture. Thank you so much for posting it. JM, We'll have to take a picture like that with you on both sides of me. Love ya me. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Ok..that tears it ... Randy has gone too far....he's writing checks his lips cant cash LOL I'd hate to have to rip the lips of my fellow poetess's off in a Tinkerbell jealousy fit ROFL AND HEY....I havent forgotten that picture Nan posted before of Balladeer and Long John smooching my Stinkys cheeks Ya know...Im starting to see a pattern here LOL OH Randy....you got some explaining to do *winkiewinkie* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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LOL @ Nan blowing me Raspberries |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, LOL & ROTF Randy is hiding, but he said to me before he left that you were his only Tinkerbell. And I might add you are the cutest cleverest Tinkerbell I ever came across. Love Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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Oh....you two are SMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOTH LOL Like I could get mad at you anyway Tell Randy its safe now...I called off the gator girls... he cant help it...that mistletoe is like raspberries...theres no turning back *L* |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kewl... We can have a group smooch... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jm & Nan, Maybe some day we will. Really love you gals. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can see why this was such a favorite...well done, our Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Of course you are included in the group. *L* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, Randy is dandy but Sy soars high. Wow! These lines so etched in perfection... mirror me She flowered in a wanton need. Her face upturned and drank in greed. Full of nectar and full of smell And brought my passions up from hell. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! How did I miss this??!! Great poem, but, I was talking about the kisses~I'm here with fresh mistletoe and chapstick! ~Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Glad you enjoyed and got to read ths. Nancy, With these kind of kisses you don't need chap stick. LOL *L* |
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