Open Poetry #17 |
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Unwrapped |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
The bows are kept after paper is torn, Sweet were the moments of giving surprise, Videos are watched and new cloths are worn, Some need returns for a different size. Cuddles on the couch with red wine from France, Meat and cheese basket from Hickory farms, Slippers, robes and then a new dress for a dance, Perfume and make-up to enhance your charms. There are little gifts from friends far away, Cards are reread reminding us once more, With greetings and wishes for love this day, Taping them around the frame of the door. Bits of wrapping scattered everywhere, But to sleep one last unwrapping to share. Bill |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...sounds intriguing... add a little snow storm - some eggnogg... ![]() |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you got wine from France??? ![]() Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, I too can't help but save bows after unwrapping presents! (smiles) Such a beautiful sonnet, sweet friend, I hope you had the happiest holidays! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is a beautiful write.Wine from France hmmm. Peaches |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, looks like you had the better unwrapping! lol...lovely to imagine. This one could get me through a cold night. Well done! ![]() |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice collection of musings, enjoy the holiday cache! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* I absolutely love the ending...it is the perfect way to finish the Christmas unwrapping. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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