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Poetically Peeking |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I’m not all that you think, or know Only what is seen, what I show Just a slight glimmer, of the sea light reflections, mirroring me Images viewed from inner glass True emotions you’ll not trespass Many facets, each one is real Each portrays different, how I feel Sights of shimmer, change with the day Visions revealed in word’s portray Glimpses given of hidden heart Never whole, only offered, part Poetically peeking, inside The rest for now, I choose to hide ~SEA~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, An interesting read, enjoyed |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh, you think you can hide from us??? No way dear SEA, your Muse is telling us all about you  Beautiful poem HUGS, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
I do believe this is the first poem I have read from you, and I do believe that I like it. I'm a loser with words lately... So thats all I'm gonna say. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I always thought you were a poet at the peek of her career!  Actually, this is excellent. We all show bits and pieces and what others may see but there is so much more to all of us...a great reason why judgements should be at a minimum. You say it well, dear SEA  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Love the poem and the picture, Butterfly Beach by Richard Yaco Nice writing SEA. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Beautiful work. This is really beautiful. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Another fine sonnet ... and scriptive. You do so shimmer!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
A shimmering descriptive write, enjoyed the flow. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Too ironic. My response in the Grinch poem was before I read this! Hmmmm. Seems I'm on the right track. Loved this poem. We are all more complex then we let on.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- Ah yes...very well said, my friend, and very true for many of us. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-26-2001 01:31 AM).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautiful poem and picture.You have penned this well. Peaches |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sights of shimmer, change with the day Visions revealed in word’s portray Glimpses given of hidden heart Never whole, only offered, part =================================== There is much to see beyond the rhymes for one who reads between the lines. Poetry can be a reflection true a window with a view to the heart & soul of you.  (perfect pic) You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhhhh Sea this one is beautifully penned, will keep it if you don't mind (((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I was peeking - I knew there was more that we couldn't see... I knew it... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo beautiful, it too is a wonderful feeling to me to reveal much of the beauty from our heart to others! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much and I always smile when I read your lovely words! (big hugggsssssss) I hope you had the most merriest Christmas! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true, through poetry we do reveal quite a lot about ourselves, but sometimes we also hold other parts of us back. I know myself, I have written some poems that I don't post, but keep for myself, because they tell a little too much. We all have to have our little secret selves. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I agree to what Tracey said. I enjoyed this write. I also enjoyed the painting. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, what you have written is about all of us, I do believe, but in that style of yours that sings on that breeze...very gentle smile |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
WOW. This is a beautiful poem, SEA. Very well written and very true of us all I believe. Wonderfully written, a true joy to read. Thanks for sharing. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
very very pretty piece. Wonderful flow. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunningly beautiful. I love the whole vision of your words. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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