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wornways
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0 posted 2001-12-26 03:40 AM


winter trees

capillaries form
mid moonlit clouds of heaven
downwardly weaving
joining into fibrous veins
reaching deep beneath the earth

[This message has been edited by wornways (12-26-2001 03:41 AM).]

© Copyright 2001 Erin A. Thomas - All Rights Reserved
peaches73533
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1 posted 2001-12-26 04:01 AM


What an image you show here.A tree growing from the ground with snow ascending from heaven to join the tree.
Peaches

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2 posted 2001-12-26 12:23 PM


Beautifully painted...a stark silhouette of poetry. I loved the economy of words. Nice write!
ecrivan
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3 posted 2001-12-26 12:48 PM


some stark beauty you have woven, it's all a wondrous picture!


Opeth
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4 posted 2001-12-26 01:09 PM


In one word, cool.
Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-26 01:39 PM


*sigh* makes me see the forest so dressed in snow after a fresh new snow fall. The vision you gave me is a gift of pure beauty. Thank you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-26 03:15 PM






(sigh) Oh my gosh, this made me feel like I was reaching up to heaven, against the light lovely snowflakes, floating in nirvana bliss! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, trees reach up to the heavens in your words! (kiss on cheek) I hope you had the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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