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Christmas Card from my sweetie.....
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Christmas Card from my sweetie..... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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This morning I checked my E-mail (I do it daily without fail). A great way for my day to start.... A Christmas card from my sweetheart! A scene of snow-capped mountains tall With sprinkles of a light snowfall, A tiny cottage, windows bright, With stars above cascading light. A Christmas melody then played All while the picture was displayed. It's beauty took my breath away - A precious gift for Christmas day. But, much more than the scenery, It was the words that got to me Of love undying from my sweet And how I made her life complete. She said I was the only one That she could truly count upon And she would have a perfect life The day that she became my wife. Yes, blessed I am that she is mine. My eyes devoured every line. There's just one doubt that does arise - Who are all those cc: guys?  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (12-22-2001 07:37 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, When you find out let me know. LOL Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles) Oh my gosh, I just love how you build up your thoughts to the ending, an e-mail greeting! (smiles) Sooooooo clever, sweet friend, your words always touch my heart so deeply! We all wish you the happiest holidays, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Could they be Santa's Elves? LOL Cute poem! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer,  Cute write.. lol. You brought a smile to my face hehe  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hilarious...great ending Deary...loved it  ~Victoria~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh Deer, Any woman who had someone as talented and wonderful as you, would never look at another man. Happy Holidays |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey sweetie pie, You brilliance shines through in all your poems! Someday I hope to be able to write as good as you 'deer! Happy Holidays neighbor! RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Balladeer....this is too cute! About those other guys....not sure..  LOL....thanks for the chuckle! ~Holiday Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, she slipped up huh !!! This is so cute. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Absolutely adorable. Now cc could mean carbon copy, but carbon copy of what? You might have to ask her what she really means, but I am sure that her thoughts were on the right track. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL, you silly, this is too cute...I kept saying awww, then you had to go and make me laugh! nicely done 'deer |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
phooey was supposed to be bcc geesh....  you write quite well, you know that? i suspect you've had some practice *smile* i love it, michael!!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deer, *Giggling* you should know by now...it's faster than sending out the indivuals and Christmas fast is what girls need. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh Im so sorry...  I can explain the whole thing ... no --really!!!  you see I sent it out to all the members of the Spammy Fan Club...so they would know how you are the only one that is worthy of spammy smooches  Merry Christmas Michael... may your stockings be stuffed with Spam and Vienna Sausages |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
maybe they are Santa's elves..curious ending there, nicely done! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer this is sooooooooo cute, I love it, love it, love it, You had me hooked all the way to the end, now fancy sending it out like that. That's just plain careless. (It wasn't me, I was away that day, I have a note of excuse, and anyway I didn't do it) That's just in case anyone is thinking of putting the blame on me. Wonderful writing love absolutely wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This was really well done, Balladeer... I especially loved the surprise ending!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy...you'll be the first! Noah....glad you enjoyed! Poet Devine..getting a little on the side? Could be!! Tara..and such a pretty face it is with a smile on it..thank you! Victoria..story of my life...great endings! LOL! I thank you..... inot2B...from your mouth to God's ear...TELL THEM!! Rose Petal..you do just fine! Thank you, sweet lady! Enchantress...go ahead..laugh at my misfortune! ROFL! Thanks for chuckling.. Kathleen..could the fact that she was blond have anything to do with it? hmmm.... Ariana...yea, right! Wanna buy a bridge? LOL! SEA...sounds like my love life...awww and then a laugh! Life just ain't fair!!! Doreen...nah, I just chicken wing it! Kethry...you little schemers! (I love it when you giggle!) Janet Marie..I'll stuff mine with spam and you stuff yours with gams and we'll BOTH have fantastic stockings! ecrivan..well, she IS a little pixie! Thanks for reading! Mushy....having you hooked would REALLY be a Christmas gift!! Chipmunk lady...thank you! I appreciate your stopping by.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhhh dear Michael ... you are just too wonderful for words sometimes!  What a marvelous ending ... I just love that mind of yours, lol. Thanks for the smiles! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oops! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Whew, thanks for the reminder...I was just about to send some cards...right "B"cc, not cc!!! Lol. This is cute Michael, I wasn't expecting that ending. You gave me a wonderful chuckle tonight. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're bad, deer one.. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
LOL those are the same as your CC:girls Didn't you know???? Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Balladeer- Don't you fret my darling 'deer Just get your booty over here Leave her to those other men And I will make you smile again You're just toooooo cute...ya know that? LOL @ Titia! Me thinks she's got you figured out! LOL! Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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