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tearpearl
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since 2001-12-14
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0 posted 2001-12-25 05:54 PM



She wants to have a magical kiss
That makes her drop through the floor
Because she’s never had it before

She wants someone to tell her she’s amazing
When someone looks her in the eyes
And to hold her close when they dance

She wants to be in love
Really in love
Because she’s never been in love before

And she wants to have a broken heart
Bleeding in someone else’s hands
Because she’s never had one before

She wants to cry for days
Her broken heart feels like it won’t heal
Because she’s never cried for days before

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1 posted 2001-12-25 05:58 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Oksana, this is so so sad, I hope this isn't related to how you really feel, for we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) May all broken hearts like hers mend and shine with the joy of true love and happiness! (big hugggssssss) MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-12-25 07:03 PM


and she deserves too!  welcome!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
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3 posted 2001-12-25 07:10 PM


And she wants to have a broken heart
Bleeding in someone else’s hands
Because she’s never had one before

This is a great poem...be careful what you ask for.

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