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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-12-25 05:12 PM


" Burned "
© 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
V1:
Disappointment, keeps dropping into my life
situation changed, somehow over night
and all I seem to write are sad songs
'cause love's so distant, it's almost gone
Now to who can I turn, without getting burned ?

C:
Now I don't ever wanna close my eyes and
now I don't ever wanna say goodnight 'cause
I'm afraid it will haunt me forever...
Tell me who can I turn to without getting burned ?

V2:
Fustration knocks, the painting to my life down
Confusion leaves, my head spinning 'round
wanna run but seem to get nowhere
'cause I am stuck with-in my own fears.
Now to who can I turn, without getting burned ?

C:
Now I don't ever wanna close my eyes and
now I don't ever wanna say goodnight 'cause
I'm afraid it will haunt me forever...
Tell me who can I turn to without getting burned ?

B:
It will be a cold day in hell before
I'll find the key to unlock the door
to my heart and let it show...

Now to who can I turn ?

C:
Now I don't ever wanna close my eyes and
now I don't ever wanna say goodnight 'cause
I'm afraid it will haunt me forever...
Tell me who can I turn to without getting burned ?

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (12-25-2001 05:17 PM).]

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-12-25 06:02 PM


This is a sad poem for Christmas, is it really you or just thoughts?

Anyway HUGS to whom it may concern

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-12-25 07:25 PM


Sad, but a well written tune. I hope your heart will have happier notes to sing by New Year's Day. Peace, and good harmony to you.
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