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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-12-25 11:29 AM

Above the clouds my love drifts to you
pushed along by Angels wings
softly my love reaches you
and a lovers song it sings

Dream of me
and I
will be
your
destiny

The dark of night is where I’ll be
in the shadows of your sleep
closer than a breath away
softly to you I will creep

Dream of me
and I
will be
your
destiny

Quietly I slip to your side
and take you in my embrace
my heart has found in you
a memory it will not erase

Dream of me
and I
will be
your
destiny

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (12-25-2001 11:33 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-25 11:42 AM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the words of this verse forever echo in your lovers heart and fill your heart with joy!(kiss on cheek) MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-12-25 11:51 AM

This is beautiful Sharon ... melodic and mesermizing. Much enjoyed, Merry Christmas to you and yours my friend.

Best wishes,
/Kit

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-12-25 12:11 PM

I like the sound of this. Very nice, hope you have sweet dreams.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-12-25 02:13 PM

Wow, Sharon? Dare I type it? This reads like---pssst----WITCHCRAFT!!!

and, I can only add, "what's been done,
let none undo, where once was one, now be two!"

Excellent work here! Perhaps you should consider a dance around the maypole as well...rofl...like doreen, I crack myself up sometimes!!!

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-12-25 03:01 PM

*wow* Sharon, what a fabulous write. Love it very very much!!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-12-25 03:12 PM

this is softly romantic

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-12-25 03:14 PM

this is so beautiful. I mean really, it's full of tender love offerings

I love it!!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-12-26 02:12 AM

Sharon-
This is truly beautiful, my friend.
Hope your Christmas was a happy one.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2001-12-26 02:23 AM

very nice poem here. Happy Holidays

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

10 posted 2001-12-26 02:29 AM

Beautifully romantic.
peaches

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2001-12-26 09:39 AM

This is gorgeous, both the thoughts and the soft way it is written. Reminds me of a place I spend a lot of time...in my dreams...in someone elses dreams. Love this one very much Sharon

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2001-12-26 09:48 AM

Poet deVine,
OK you standing near some mistletoe? Love Sy

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

13 posted 2001-12-26 09:49 AM

This is soooo sweet!!! Especially...

"Quietly I slip to your side
and take you in my embrace
my heart has found in you
a memory it will not erase"

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

14 posted 2001-12-26 02:04 PM

Sharon,
I haven't seen you in a while. Wonderful writing.....

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

15 posted 2001-12-26 02:33 PM

And as your words burn upon the page so does your promise....

Dream of me
and I
will be
your
destiny

for indeed you will be his destiny and he will be embraced in a heat of love never dreamed of. Absolute perfection. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

16 posted 2001-12-26 03:11 PM

One of your most bestest efforts M' Lady!
Satpsych.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2001-12-26 03:46 PM

Sharon, this is beauiful. I remember when I was so sure of destiny, and who it meant for me. But I was proven wrong. Sigh.
Happy holidays, and beautiful dreams.
Sandra

Tennessee Angel
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Tennessee

18 posted 2001-12-26 05:44 PM

This is so romantic! What a beautiful write!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

19 posted 2001-12-26 05:51 PM

Thank you all for such kind words. You've made me smile today!

Jamie
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Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

20 posted 2001-12-26 11:22 PM

Well Lady, that is only fitting since you have given so many smiles to so many of us for so long now.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

21 posted 2001-12-26 11:41 PM

This is so romantic. I love it. It is just beautiful.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

22 posted 2001-12-26 11:59 PM

Poet deVine,
serenity was right...this is bewitching. The title suggested a command the verse implied it is a spell! Fabulous.

Consider me spellbound and bewitched!

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

23 posted 2001-12-27 12:01 PM

Sharon,

I reallyyyyyy like this. It is so soft and pretty..

Really beautiful writing

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

24 posted 2001-12-27 12:05 PM

This has a soft elegance to it and it really does make one sigh; it's very pretty and dreamily romantic

This definately is a keeper! ~ It's right up my alley

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

mutington
Member

since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

25 posted 2001-12-27 01:40 AM

Softly romantic, beautifully written!

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S MEADOWS

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

26 posted 2001-12-27 08:51 AM

This is so soft, romantic and words cannot describe how it has brought back memories for all of us (especially me). Thank you for sharing.

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

27 posted 2001-12-27 09:05 AM

Let me first put out a disclaimer - I am not responding to this because you are the or a administrator...I never follow the herd of sheep just for the sake of following.

Witht that being said, I did find this poem to be well written, well rhymed, with an excellent cadence. The way your, what I call "choruses" were structured added an additional impact to your message.

Romantic...from the deep caverns within your heart, indeed.

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