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When Time Stands Still
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When Time Stands Still |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When Time Stands Still There is no crime within And time is not a sin. The mirror shows her view Of lovely old and true. For change continues change Although it seems quite strange My eyes still see a bride With smiles of youth inside I do not see the mirrored view For what I see is young and true. This is the beauty of my goal This is the beauty stays my soul And ever flows eternity And will to me forever be. It’s fixed inside a minds begin And stays all time for it’s within. I’m sure she sees a similar view Prince charming that her heart first knew. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This truly brought a smile to my face Sy. A love poem for anyone of any age. And I'm sure she does see you as her Prince Charming...after all, to us here, you are a Prince of a Poet and oh my! You ARE charming!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
should every bride be seen by groom in love's light, then there's room for them to grow old, side by side in love's light, groom holds his bride |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no crime within And time is not a sin. ============================ For change continues change Although it seems quite strange ================================= This is the beauty of my goal This is the beauty stays my soul And ever flows eternity And will to me forever be. It’s fixed inside a minds begin And stays all time for it’s within. I’m sure she sees a similar view Prince charming that her heart first knew. ======================================= this is precious Sy ... and youre anologies of time are so darn cool!!! "mirror mirror on the wall" who's the SMOOOOTHEST Stinky poet of them all  YOU are the Prince of Poetry... KING of COOL Emperor of Epopee Monarch of melodics Royal of romance Raja of rhyme Ceasar of cadence Vicar of verse Midas of meter Czar of couplets and last but never least ... me Stinky of the Winkies  Ice covers my soul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is truly inspirational Sy! I do believe that as years go by the one we are deeply in love with still sees us as forever young and beautiful...or handsome, whichever the case may be. Well done. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"This is the beauty of my goal This is the beauty stays my soul" I'm echoing all these wonderful comments above, and adding my thanks for such a tender and beautiful read Seymour. What a lovely and flowing tribute to the one you love ... a heart warming read indeed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am sure she see that way too. This is so beautiful. It tells of true love that stays true through all the years. BRAVO!!! A  from me because the love you have for yourwife is so beautiful to see. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful and so eloquently said... I loved it. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely Seymour. We always see them as they were when we forst fell in love with them. To us, the view remains eternal. All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Really beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy..so tenderly written...love makes all things beautiful..I think it's a good thing! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling and "sying"--this reminded me of an old dear friend, who told me, regarding time, that if you look at the clock in its circular motion, the only place time stands still is in the center---just wish I could get off the fast-paced second hand! Hugs you, my gentle poet! (and I know, I think too much sometimes...) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Astounding write!! Simply timeless ... Serenity's comment on time is well spread ... time is endless, but stands still for those which are centered! Great job!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Thank you sweet lady and you are a favourite of mine. *L* Sunshine, Wonderful response thank you. *L* JM, You overwhelm me sometimes. Love Sy Nancy, Thank you sweet. *L* Kit, And a heart warming thanks to you. *L* Startime, Thank you for the bravo. *L* Enchanted, Thank you for the eloquent. *L* Lone Wolf, Nice comment thank you. Walker, Thanks for the beautiful. Martie, Yes it is and thank you. *L* Serenity, Good thinking, thank you. *L* Ctowen, Wonderful response, thank you. |
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