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A New Beginning
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A New Beginning |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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The veil is thinning Night is gone A new beginning The coming dawn Then so suddenly on the rise I see autumns auburn eyes Where the heavens and earth embrace They touch so gently upon her face She is the fire That's claiming me Newborn desire This flaming tree Silence is broken Throughout the land All are awoken By her hand As she ascends from on the hill Each dying flower meets her will And every time she walks this way They all shall live another day How do I know She won't miss me For I still grow Apart of this tree As she fades My tear stained eyes Follow the glades Where the river lies On the horizon a wondrous sight A lonely lover lights up the night Trust in feelings not the mind For all along we've been so blind To share the sun Emboldens me To make as one Our golden tree |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
All right, whoever-you-are! Untie Walt and let him loose!!!  Excellent writing!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Walt! Is that you?? Oh my...showing your sensitive side and very very well I might add! This is a remarkable write!! And, I love it ever so much! Thank you for this one! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
quite a vivid picture of one of the best times of year! merrily good...and tha crowd goes wild, kahh, kahh! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am laughing here at Balladeer, but seriously Walt this was awesome writing, and this is truly a "keeper" - Great job!  ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"autumn's auburn eyes" Oh Walt....I didn't know you felt that way !!!  this is great!Kathleen |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What pocket did you pull this from, anyway? Balladeer's? |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Yes, Friday's are always new beginnings. Good write Walt. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ This is stunning poetry~ Replete with vividity and imagery, yet gently clothed in tenderness~ VERY VERY VERY enjoyable~ A keeper~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Magnificent.... regards, Walt, Sudhir |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Walt! Your sensitive side shows quite often and this is one of those times. It's got YOU written all over it. I don't think anyone could have done this better. (And I'm sure you have NO reason to have your hand in 'deer's pocket!) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely magnificent writing. I love it. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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