Open Poetry #17 |
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If you are feeling lonely tonight |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands ![]() |
If you are feeling lonely tonight nobody there to talk to Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart Cause lonelyness can be a burden, come and do take part You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke Tonight will be a special night for Christmas is there tomorrow So please come over and sit with me, let's get rid of the sorrow For Christmas is a happy time when candles show their light The birth of a little boy far away shine upon by a star bright So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link. [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-24-2001 09:22 PM).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke" I wish I could come hang out with you, it'd be a great time ![]() ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, A lovely gentle write, enjoyed |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Titia: I would love to come and be with you too. Yes, Christmas can be very lonely if you have no one to be with you. I would sit and have coffee with you and I bet we would have a grand time. Thank you for the offer. Your words were very thoughtful and are full of meaning. Thank you for sharing with us. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I am feeling very lonely but I am not alone. That is the worst kind. Thank you dear lady. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Aw, I don't want anyone to be alone on Christmas! I will come and hang out with you, it would be a fun fun time! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke' What a great poem, Titia! I love these lines, especially...wonderfully written! sp ![]() ![]() And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful sentiments |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart I get this image of resting on an overstuffed, perfectly broken in sofa...just listening to you. The night is warm with comfort. Thank you, Titia. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
SEA, I'm choking already LOL Seymour, glad you enjoyed Ariana, always glad to see a 'new' face, I'll put the kettle on. Kathleen, I HUG you and hold you thight. Hypnoses, you come over and we'll have a party (I hope I did say welcome to you?) Snowpants and Jamie, thank you Duncan, how did you know what my sofa looks like???? ![]() HUGS to you all, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Titia, this poem is the perfect description of a true friend. Who ever has you for one is blessed indeed. Beautiful writing, m'lady ![]() |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wish I could come join you, Titia. I would tell you some stories and listen to your jokes. ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
After reading your poem I am not feeling so lonely....thank you, Titia. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- I know I'm a little late for Christmas, but can I come hang out with you anyway? ![]() You are just soooooooo sweet, my friend. I just LOVE you. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Balladeer, you'll always be my friend ![]() Smartchick, you're so welcome Startime, big HUGS back dear Vicky, Christmas or not it would be a thrill to laugh and giggle with you, so do come over any time you wish, love you too ![]() Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetTitia~ Bill and I want to join Vicky and have a blast of blessings at your house~ ![]() 'So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove' Thank you sweet friend .. you are a blessing that has happened in my heart~ Thank you for being here~ I love you~ Happy New Year~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia, I can imagine sitting with you exactly like you have said. You are the most inviting person I have "met", and the greatest ambassador of the Netherlands that is for sure! Happy New Year to you and yours! ~*~ Happy New Year ~*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - thank you for this lovely poem my friend. I'm so glad I had a chance to read it. It is very touching... HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOURS... BC |
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