Open Poetry #17 |
If you are feeling lonely tonight |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
If you are feeling lonely tonight nobody there to talk to Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart Cause lonelyness can be a burden, come and do take part You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke Tonight will be a special night for Christmas is there tomorrow So please come over and sit with me, let's get rid of the sorrow For Christmas is a happy time when candles show their light The birth of a little boy far away shine upon by a star bright So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link. [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-24-2001 09:22 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke" I wish I could come hang out with you, it'd be a great time (((hugs))) and Merry Christmas to you!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, A lovely gentle write, enjoyed |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Titia: I would love to come and be with you too. Yes, Christmas can be very lonely if you have no one to be with you. I would sit and have coffee with you and I bet we would have a grand time. Thank you for the offer. Your words were very thoughtful and are full of meaning. Thank you for sharing with us. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, I am feeling very lonely but I am not alone. That is the worst kind. Thank you dear lady. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Aw, I don't want anyone to be alone on Christmas! I will come and hang out with you, it would be a fun fun time! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke' What a great poem, Titia! I love these lines, especially...wonderfully written! sp And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful sentiments |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart I get this image of resting on an overstuffed, perfectly broken in sofa...just listening to you. The night is warm with comfort. Thank you, Titia. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
SEA, I'm choking already LOL Seymour, glad you enjoyed Ariana, always glad to see a 'new' face, I'll put the kettle on. Kathleen, I HUG you and hold you thight. Hypnoses, you come over and we'll have a party (I hope I did say welcome to you?) Snowpants and Jamie, thank you Duncan, how did you know what my sofa looks like???? Always an arm around you my friend and an open place at my sofa HUGS to you all, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Titia, this poem is the perfect description of a true friend. Who ever has you for one is blessed indeed. Beautiful writing, m'lady |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wish I could come join you, Titia. I would tell you some stories and listen to your jokes. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
After reading your poem I am not feeling so lonely....thank you, Titia. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Titia- I know I'm a little late for Christmas, but can I come hang out with you anyway? You are just soooooooo sweet, my friend. I just LOVE you. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Balladeer, you'll always be my friend Smartchick, you're so welcome Startime, big HUGS back dear Vicky, Christmas or not it would be a thrill to laugh and giggle with you, so do come over any time you wish, love you too Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetTitia~ Bill and I want to join Vicky and have a blast of blessings at your house~ 'So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove' Thank you sweet friend .. you are a blessing that has happened in my heart~ Thank you for being here~ I love you~ Happy New Year~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia, I can imagine sitting with you exactly like you have said. You are the most inviting person I have "met", and the greatest ambassador of the Netherlands that is for sure! Happy New Year to you and yours! ~*~ Happy New Year ~*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - thank you for this lovely poem my friend. I'm so glad I had a chance to read it. It is very touching... HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOURS... BC |
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