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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-12-24 05:27 PM


you caught me
watching your lips
today;
i was standing close
by your side
watching them
as they moved around inaudible words
and through silent sentences
directed at someone else;
their thin coat of
pale pink lipstick
warmed my thoughts
and colored my imagination
with fiery fantasies
(most inappropriate
for an office meeting);
then
just for an instant
you stopped
and looked
and caught me
deep in thought
wondering
how they would feel.

© Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-12-24 06:10 PM


Very nicely done! This probably happens so  often. You've penned excellent imagery of a  wistful woman watcher. Maybe she was peeking at you on the sly too?
CondorSey
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since 2001-12-24
Posts 28
Dam-Nation
2 posted 2001-12-24 06:21 PM


Nice imagery.  You were able to simply state something that many of us have experienced.

Is there a sequel to tell us how it turned out?  :-)

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2001-12-24 07:54 PM


woohoohoohoo now im aroused
haha j/k
merry x-mas dude

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-12-24 08:06 PM


Excellent!!! I love it.

Could you come to MY next meeting?

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
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California, USA
5 posted 2001-12-25 02:48 AM


Midnitesun...thank you, this did happen and I do like to observe the ladies.*g*

CondorSey...thank you, I don't think there will be a sequel. (Don't think my wife would like it.*S*)

EagleScorpion...thank you and a Merry Christmas to you too!

Poet deVine...thanks PdV, save me a seat and I'll be there.*G*

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