Open Poetry #17 |
voyeur exposed? |
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
you caught me watching your lips today; i was standing close by your side watching them as they moved around inaudible words and through silent sentences directed at someone else; their thin coat of pale pink lipstick warmed my thoughts and colored my imagination with fiery fantasies (most inappropriate for an office meeting); then just for an instant you stopped and looked and caught me deep in thought wondering how they would feel. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done! This probably happens so often. You've penned excellent imagery of a wistful woman watcher. Maybe she was peeking at you on the sly too? |
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CondorSey Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 28Dam-Nation |
Nice imagery. You were able to simply state something that many of us have experienced. Is there a sequel to tell us how it turned out? :-) |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
woohoohoohoo now im aroused haha j/k merry x-mas dude |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent!!! I love it. Could you come to MY next meeting? |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Midnitesun...thank you, this did happen and I do like to observe the ladies.*g* CondorSey...thank you, I don't think there will be a sequel. (Don't think my wife would like it.*S*) EagleScorpion...thank you and a Merry Christmas to you too! Poet deVine...thanks PdV, save me a seat and I'll be there.*G* |
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