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SEA
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0 posted 2001-12-24 01:36 PM



Whispers
fall in the night
caressing warm, my soul
speaking to me of sweet desire
whispers

*~*

kisses
melting my heart
slow, steady, passionate
rendering me on knees, begging
kisses

*~*

loving
deep in the night
with whispers and kisses
touching by light of sweet desire
loving

*~*

sighing
as passion soothes
the need that burns this night
this ache of sensual wanting
sighing

*~*

sleeping
now that loving
has been sated in full
in each other’s arms, sweet dreaming
sleeping

*~*


~SEA~


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Magnus
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1 posted 2001-12-24 01:44 PM


enjoy
so inviting
soft caress of man's heart
Given for us all to admire
enjoy

Thank You Sue...

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2 posted 2001-12-24 02:11 PM



Well I think Magnus said it all.  Well done, Little One...

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3 posted 2001-12-24 02:24 PM


Sea - I am sweating after this steamy write.  Nicely done.

Now this is the Holiday season, do you think Santa would find this appropriate?  Totally kidding.  

Dave

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4 posted 2001-12-24 02:40 PM


Magnus, thank you

Sunshine, thank you!

Dave, of course LOL

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5 posted 2001-12-24 02:52 PM


Susan,

    I love reading your words You write so well.  Merry Christmas

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2001-12-24 04:10 PM


Beautiful Susan...just like you...Merry Christmas sweetie.

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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7 posted 2001-12-24 05:35 PM




(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Susan, these poems had me dreaming of falling into my dream girls arms and resting happily, feeling her heart beat to mine. (sigh) Sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, may loves joy forever fill you with happiness! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend, merry Christmas! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-12-24 06:39 PM


Romantic and beautiful, Sea...
and I love the style you used, it really complemented the poem beautifully.
Great job!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2001-12-25 01:56 AM


Tara~ and I yours thank you

Nancy~ awwww....thank you for that

Noah~ I love getting your replies!! thank you sweetie

Madame C~ thank you very much


~SEA

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