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Baby Bathes
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Baby Bathes |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
 Baby Bathes Rinsing, washing Baby bathes Babbling fond incoherencies Startled, stops Eyes soap stung Poised at the Brink of crying Then pain To pleasure yields Splash kaplash Stacato arms ecstatic Conducting the symphony Of bubbles forming Now, snatched to Loving mother's arms To toweling--mid symphony |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joe, A delightful bath. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No better smell than that of a freshly washed baby...powder and all... so enjoyed! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Joe--You know how much I love this double delightful sketch and poem. Hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo adorable, sweet friend, I too always smile when I smell the powder of a babys bath! (sigh) Just envisioning the smile on a babys face splashing around in the bubbles made me smile! (big hugggssssss) Sooooo beautiful, sweet Joe, your words are always a delight to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The symphonic orchestra that the cute 'lil baby is conducting must be the playing the most harmonious melody ever. Not to mention, the wettest...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Joe, I felt the splash and heard the gurgle...what more could I ask of in a poem. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joe, I just love this happy soap bubble of a poem....such a delight! *Happy Holidays, hugs, Nancy* *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this took me back a ways, I won't say how long but it did! Kathleen (Kay) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
splash, and kaplash and enjoy the bath! nicely scented one at that. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very sweet, well written poem, Joe... and the picture goes so well with it.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joe, Oh the memories. Thanks for the reminder! |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Thank you all for your kind comments. I did the sketch of my grandson,Nicky at an age a few years older than the baby I had in mind in the poem, but I thought it still added to the overall idea. It's a joyful sight to see a baby enjoying its first baths. Cheers to all, Joe Lamando |
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