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To a Special Person
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To a Special Person |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To a Special Person She tolls the bells of timely goals To reach into our very souls And cuts the ropes to bring belief With words and phrase of sharp relief With Phantoms of her fantasy She takes our hand in ecstasy With honey and with nectar there To make our soul to sniff the air So nettles the petals of her mind. Like flowers power odors bind To wring a garment velvet soft And make our minds to fly aloft She mixes fantasy with guile Makes our mind and face to smile And gently beams the mist of scheme To make it seem just like a dream. She scepters our humanity. Just like the wind will reign the sea. |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Seymour, This is very well done. And when do we find out who the mystery woman is? Joe Lamando |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Joe, That's for her to guess. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes the knowing is in the glowing and in the smile of Sy's worth-wile Merry Christmas, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Have a happy and keep glowing. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll bet she thinks you're special too I bet if she could she would ... write your name across skies of blue. I'll bet you ring her bell and ching her chimes I'll bet she adores you ... and your gifted wisdom's rhymes. I'll even go so far to say you're the sunshine in her day I bet if she could she would ... meet you in Eden where the butterflies (and dragons) play. I heard she dreams of tea by the sea It seems she schemes ... for for the pleasure of your company. She told me you're so easy on her mind She said if she was a poet ... she'd pay you back for all your verses kind. She said some days ... some ways ... your minds entwine ... said in rhymed remind ... that shes grateful for friendships find. ~*~ ~*~ *winkiewinkie* Have a wonderful holiday me sweet Stinky... keep Randy out of the mistletoe (and cat nip)  *L*Merry Christmas Sy  love ya  me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You know there are degrees of delight. You just broke the thermometer. Have a happy, Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, she's lucky to have you for a fan....this is wonderful!!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautiful verse in tribute to someone who has clearly touched your heart through their words. Exquisite phrasing throughout this lovely and flowing piece Sy ... beautifully written. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, She's just a wonderful person, *L* Kit, And a beautiful comment, thank you. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Hmmmmmmm...I'm leaning toward a few wonderful poets here, but I can't quite put my finger on it! (smiles) This is such a beautiful tribute, sweet friend, I just know she will cherish it forever! (big hugggssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I enjoyed this well rhymed and touching write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
and there is a special poet Sy who puts the wink in every eye with verses smile and tear to touch the heart of year Hugs! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
She must be very special indeed to inspire such wonderful poetry in you. People like that are one in a million and should be kept very close to our hearts forever. Best wishes of the season to both of you. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, this is a lovely tribute to whomever she may be. Just lovely. *Happy Holidays.....hugs, Nancy* *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I liked the flow and imagery here, good write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said Seymour...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So eloquent the phrase you choose To sihouette the mystery muse Her profile sketched by painter's pen In black and white, this mystery friend Lovely Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you and have a happy. Oepth, Glad you enjoyed. Martie, Cute and thanks for the hugs. Tracey, Have a happy and yes they are. *L* Nancy, Thanks for the lovely and have a happy *L* Ecrivan, Thanks for the good and have a happy. James, Have a happy and thanks for the well said. Elizabeth, This friend is no mystery or shouldn't be to you. Love Sy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
she sounds like an enchanting poetess! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, She is, thank you and have a happy. *L* |
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