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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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of sentences and rhymes with words, both good and evil of schemes and lives and times feelings are the backdrop they color truths and lies words, like threads through fabric make intricate designs phrases hooked together provide the ties that bind with memories in the stitches of loved ones who have died emotions are the colors they make us laugh and cry tight threads bound together fond hellos and sad goodbyes form fringes round the edges of the tapestry of life  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is fantastic! I loved this one.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You wove a wonderful poem with vivid imagery. "feelings are the backdrop they color truths and lies words, like threads through fabric make intricate designs" |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Lyra, You are a dream weaver of words. Your stories of hardship and overcoming them and the way you still see the wonder in the world are so inspiring. I'm glad you're my friend. Roger |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Loved it..nicely done Madame Chipmunk ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame C, You have woven a delight And I swear you are right. Enjoyed |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,beautiful words written by a wonderful friend.  TAKE CARE!Love,Juanita  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) Oh my gosh, this beautifully breathtaking vision reminded me of a poem I wrote before called "Thaumaturgic Tapestry". (smiles) I think I'm going to post it and dedicate it to you, sweet Lyra! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always weave such magic and lovely emotion! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (smiles) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnificent. a tapestry of a poets heart and mind. What could be more beautiful. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
I don't usually go for such structured verse, but I enjoyed this. Nice poem! Glenn Logan |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a beautiful portrait of who we are. Good job!!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You're lovely and I'm so glad you are here, part of this, I loved the old song (remember?) by Carole King called Tapestry and I love your words. Thank you so much for this. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for liking my poem, Eloise, Victoria and Midnitesun.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Noah, I can't wait to see your poem...I will be looking for it!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Glenn and Amusemi...for making me feel so special.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Kay...thanks for your reply, and I must tell you that it was Carole King's song which inspired this poem.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for your lovely rhyming reply, Seymour.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Juanita....my dear friend...thanks so much for your reply. Y'all take care now.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for the lovely compliment, Startime. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Roger for that unbelievably lovely reply. You are making my head swell. I am not sure I am worthy of such high praise. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully woven, Madame Chipmunk! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Madame Chipmunk, Too cool! May I borrow your loom? Wow, such fabulous imagery.  |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lyra This is one of my favorites.Indeed a real beauty and work of art!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Madame Chipmunk- So beautifully penned. I enjoyed this. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much, Martie.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Larry, You can borrow my loom anytime, but its a virtual loom. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Stevie and Vicky...for your replies. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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