A Moment...Held In My Hands...

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-23 10:37 PM

One moment....a moment held in my hands.
The softness of a touch igniting a spark.
Eyes that are seen across a room, inviting.
Radiance of a smile, calling me.

I felt and saw this moment.
I dream of it, I want it to come again.
Does she know that I want this...need this?
Does she care?

Life once ordinary...now for an instant..exhilarating.
The breathtaking beauty of a sensual sight.
The rush of the passions which could have been.
They are not...

Should I return to that place...find that moment?
Is the chance more than just that...a chance?
Can I ever feel that same rush, that feeling?
I want to...I need to...Will she?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-23 10:44 PM

(sigh) Such a beautiful yearning fills these words, sweet friend, I hope that her spark forever lights in your heart, just as that radiance of a smile will forever shine on your face of loves felicity! (big hugggssssss) May all your questions be answered by eternal love, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-23 10:45 PM

I think it's what we all want...this is so great

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-12-23 11:25 PM

Barry~ I'm with Sue on this one. I think we would all love to relive those first few moments. The rush...the passion.....the romance. Good things to think about here.

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-12-23 11:33 PM

Ah, that moment should be held for eternity. That is what we all wish for isn’t it?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-12-24 12:22 PM

Sounds like a wonderful moment to me, Barry. I am sure she will. Another romantic masterpiece. **hugs**

May you and yours have a very Merry Christmas.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2001-12-24 12:30 PM

the enchantments of meeting through glances
and finding out then what are those chances.

Nicely put, I enjoyed your poem

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2001-12-24 12:32 PM

A wonderful depiction of that first moment when lightning strikes!! I like this a lot!!!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2001-12-24 12:36 PM

I believe these moments are never lost ....
if they are true, they always remain in the heart.
Such as your words Barry, moments of time not to be forgot.
Yes, another great peice!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-12-24 10:09 AM

THis is good, Barry, I could feel the images!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-12-24 11:05 AM

enjoyed

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