Open Poetry #17 |
Sunday Morning Early |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sunday Morning Early early Sunday morning sitting here in the cold do I climb back in bed with you do I get so bold slip again between the sheets to where it all begins feeling your warm breath on the hunger of my skin shall I quietly lay with you embroidered in your seams or slowly shall I stir you from the embraces of your dreams for now I shall let you slumber tucked in the warmth of my arms later when you awake I shall melt within your charms "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helen, That melted the butter on my toast. A lovely, lovely write. Sy |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Makes me wanna go back to bed....very nice! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some cozy poem you've got there, nice and serene. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, "shall I quietly lay with you embroidered in your seams or slowly shall I stir you from the embraces of your dreams" Love this! Love the whole thing. Mellow in its romance and sensitivity. Well done! e |
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