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Unfolding
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Unfolding By: Noah Eaton 3/11/01 Angelic siren’s waves come kissing My hearts love beach Waiting for you to lay your desires anchor And hold you in my arms as you’ve been too long at sea Seducing me in your beauty as romantic words escape your lips Spilling a tsunami of comfort into my body Shoulders shrugging as I sigh in your overwhelming beauty Fainting into your arms, falling into a reality dream Kissing your velvet ruby lips Mesmerized by the rocking pocketwatch of loves eternity Closing my eyes, breathing the warmth of your mouth Holding you down on the soft sands, feeling happy knowing we are one, honestly Sinking into your hearts paradise Listening to your heart beat against mine, singing in canon Opening the window of my heart, melting in passions wind Holding you close, our souls finally met Holding you in your arms, as you hold me around my neck Dancing with you under the rose moon Putting my jacket around you to keep you safe and warm As you kiss me on my cheeks and forehead, warming spirits hearth true My heart is in you As yours is in mine, darling Giving you sweet, romantic love you desire Loving you for all eternity, as my heart's happily unfolding [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-23-2001 01:09 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, how lovely this is  you sure got the love bug!! It's sooooo nice enjoyed this very much |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. The imagery and the way you've written this ahhhhhhh can romantic poetry get any more vivid. Absolutely excellent writing    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ahh Noah how romantic and lovely penned.....love it dear friend Charisma |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Very good, romantic and well written write. I think I am going down to the pier right now to wait for a lovely lass to arrive.lol Dave |
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