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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-23 12:10 PM

Dearest, can you not see the love of this man?
For the deepest chasm is shallow in compare.
Will you not believe the heart in my chest?
For it is you I love, you...my lady fair.

I yearn for your touch each morning at dawn.
My ears listen for the sound of your breath.
My heart beating soulfully inside my own.
Darling, can’t you see...see that till death.

Your voice of purest music caresses my ears.
The lightest touch does give to me a chill.
My mind shows me the smile that I know
keeps me enthralled, does as it so will.

Take me into your bed as you slumber.
Hold me ever close to your own in sleep.
For you have all of this man’s number.
A love guided...and in such...so deep.

I will wake with you in my heart and mind.
My love for your own shall never wane.
Dearest...tis you that I hunt for and find.
And I shall...I will...come to you again.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2001-12-23 12:12 PM

Soooooo romantic,, I liked this a lot. strbbux

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-23 12:14 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may she be the one that forever brings music to your heart and joy to your life! (smiles) You are a true romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shie upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-23 12:15 PM

*sigh* okay now that I have had my romantic fix for the day......I can go to work with a smile on my face. Wonderfully romantic writing, Magnus..I love it, of course. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-12-23 01:04 PM

This is very romantic, Barry, are you SURE you're not on your honeymoon (again)

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-12-23 01:13 PM

I'm telling you, you are one romantic man!!!
This is so pretty

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-12-23 01:14 PM

Magnus,

Yay I like this one

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2001-12-23 03:02 PM

Magnus - this is one special lady that you write about. The best to you both...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-12-23 03:54 PM

Very nice Barry!
Happy Holidays to you and yours, Nancy.

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2001-12-23 03:59 PM

I knew exactly what I wanted to say in response to this..but..I am swooning right now..I'll have to get back to ya!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-12-23 05:00 PM

Strbbux...like the pen name....and thank you
for your thoughts...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-12-23 05:00 PM

Noah...as always...thank you..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-23 05:01 PM

Karen...thanx as always...you are a trip..
No Oysters today...OK?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-12-23 05:02 PM

Kay...silly lady...NO...not on our honeymoon.
32 years...many ups and many downs...just
plain old ordinary people with our share
of trials and tribulations...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-12-23 05:03 PM

Sue...Sue...how do you do...??

Thanx bunches as always...If I am half as
romantic as my words sometimes convey...
Well...maybe I am half..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2001-12-23 05:05 PM

Tara...I love the emoticons...

Thank you for your enthusiastic replies...
They warm my heart..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-12-23 05:06 PM

Thanx BC...she has to be special to put up
with me for all these years...We have had
our share of good and not so good moments..
Guess we are getting too old to find someone
else that would tolerate us...

Keep writing...enjoy your words..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2001-12-23 05:07 PM

Nancy...sorry so long to post...busy...watching
Kids...getting ready for the big day..
Thank you always...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-12-23 05:08 PM

RP...just let me know when you are ready...
Thanx...guess you have already said it...

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