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quickening sand |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
There are moments of our life that still make me smile even sigh and doubt my gut it is because of those moments sinking I find myself in quickening sand they say that you shouldn’t struggle try it sometime. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, So, is this going to hurt? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Something tells me he's enjoying it... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Not a struggle?.. How wonderful that would be - How do I do that???...  |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Hmmm...you make me remember things! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Pleasure and pain are sometimes interrelated. But I'm not going to try to psychoanalize you Duncan. I have a fear of quicksand(coming from the Tarzan movies),so I watch my step.  Loved the poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Of the struggle you speak, It is involuntary. Enjoyed the poem. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* just go with the flow. Not struggle....interesting concept. Very well put...you have me thinking and that is a good thing for me.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The gut feeling is usually right on, atleast, to me. I face many the struggle when I do not listen to my gut and have to go back and show myself where I wronged. It is like quicksand, the more the struggle, the worse things appear. Interesting how easy you were able to grasp it in these few, well-charged words. Great piece!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Try it sometime? LOL! Like you get another chance if you don't like it?? Ah, Duncan, as you well know...once you get in over your head...it's over  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
DUNCAN, THIS IS DAMN GOOD!! Gawd I love it! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I believe it's called "surrendering" and usually happens when a person is falling in love Kathleen (Kay) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
saying with a smile... You're so cute. I love this. ever deep...runs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Liking this a lot. It's hard not to struggle though. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Something good usually comes out of a struggle. Quicksand scares me though : ) Take care! RP |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh, I do love your poems so very much Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
No struggling? Isn't it within our nature to do that? ahh, well..I love this poem. I am many. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Shall I throw you a rope? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Still thinking this is great...but, on the second go round I'm wondering if this has anything to do with having a mud bath?  ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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