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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-12-07 09:42 AM


All of these obstacles that we are facing
as your past you are now erasing
will never be able to tear us apart
as long as you believe, and follow your heart.
When you look into my eyes
see the truth, there are no lies
there is only love felt deep inside
and a joy that I can not hide.

When you feel my touch caress your face
time will stand still here in this place.
A memory will be made between just two
and you'll never need doubt my love for you.
With every touch and every glance
I'll fill your life with true romance
then each night when you lay down to sleep
I'll hold you in my arms to keep.

Each morning then when you arise
I'll look deep into your blue eyes
and without a shadow of a doubt
you'll know what this love is all about.
I'll pull you close and hold you near
I'll say these words without any fear
and I'll hope you know these words are true
when I softly whisper "I Love You"


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 12-07-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-07 11:56 AM


Beautiful, just lovely.  Nice to read something I can understand!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Auguste
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2 posted 2001-12-07 02:16 PM


Lovely, JUST lovely!!  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
3 posted 2001-12-07 02:31 PM


enjoyed this sweet lovely gem very much.



Charisma

~*Theresia~*

sweetlilangel
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4 posted 2001-12-07 06:42 PM


OMG! That was awesome!! ~Staci and Cassi

Don't be sad because it's over smile because it happened!

Startime
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5 posted 2001-12-07 06:50 PM


*sigh* romantically perfect. I love it. There is no doubt of the love you share. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-12-07 07:48 PM


Ahhh this is love...complete.  And written with such tenderness it was pure joy to read.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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7 posted 2001-12-07 08:25 PM




(sigh) Oh Donna, you're soooooo romantic!(smiles) Without a shadow of your doubt, may your love last eternally with his! (sigh) You are sooooooo sweet, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sodpossom
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8 posted 2001-12-07 08:26 PM


Very beautiful and sweet!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

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