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a love so rare--Lady in White's Challenge
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a love so rare--Lady in White's Challenge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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you are there, here with me the only one I want to see here with me, you are there together in this love so rare there you are, here am I as tears fall from softest eyes here am I, there you are with wishes made on every star I am here, are you there? forever lost in love so rare? are you there? I am here wishing that your heart was near ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Sven, this makes my heart melt completely...major *sigh*  love it! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so very beautiful, Sven...I love it. I hope she answers all your questions the way you want them answered. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh John, you can never be too late for this challenge, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) May she forever answer all your hearts question and bring happiness to your heart forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, have the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
excellent! Kathleen (Kay) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
As always Sir, you can take words and turn them every which way and they all say "LOVE". |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
together, there is a peaceful longing here, a calming soul.....from one to another, beautifully done.... Lauren [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (12-23-2001 12:02 AM).] |
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shoffswife Junior Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 38KY, US |
awesome. i fell in love with this poem the first time i read it. the words just flow together and are perfect. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I loved the way you met the challenge and wrote your heart all in one go. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sven ... such a beautiful flow to this lovely piece. Very much enjoyed the tender questions you pose at the end, wrapping up the romantic sentiments preceding them so perfectly. Very nicely done indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, That about said it all. Delightful write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I for one am glad to see that you finally got around to Lady's challenge....it wouldn't have been complete without your try... I hope more follow suit... and Lady? Won't she be happy to see this! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven...nice to see that you joined us in the little challenge which you have met well.. Thank You..enjoyed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Startime. . . thank you. . . it always helps to ask the questions. . . Noah, thank you as always my friend, for your wonderful words. . . Irish Rose. . . thanks. . . inot2B. . .thank you. . . I'm glad that I can share with you. . . Lauren, that's when you know. . . thank you my friend. . . be well. . . shoffswife. . . thank you. . . I do try. . . and welcome again! Kethry. . . thank you. . . it's just how it came out. . . Kit, thanks. . . the questions seemed to fit. . .glad that you noticed. . . Sy, I guess it did. . . thanks. . . Sunshine, I hope that Lady doesn't mind me taking so long. . . and I hope to see more as well. . . thank you. . . Magnus, I love a challenge. . . thanks for reading my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - you are just amazing with your writings. Merry Christmas my friend... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this, so many good lines, and especially the ending question. Sometimes you have to wonder, but always hope! Happy Christmas Sandra |
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