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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Click here to visit my home page. [This message has been edited by mirror man (12-23-2001 06:19 AM).] |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very interesting write mirror man, I wish I could hear the music that goes along with it but we can't hear music anymore on here |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Such a wonderful expressive write, you always write so wonderfully! (sigh) This really had me thinking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
RosePetal -- Yes, but you still have smileys (just don't overdo it, or the smiley police will take them away). Noah -- Oh, no! Three smileys! Thank you. [This message has been edited by mirror man (12-22-2001 12:13 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed, even though my speakers are down! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
personally. . . I thought that it was the sparrows. . . well done. . . the words here are definitely not a babble. . . they have a form. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Okay, I am going to go out on a limb here. Is this about the industrial revolution...sort of? The reference to the demise of the statues..i.e. like ancient greek stuff and then the reference to the two-by-four...an observation of the less permanent replacement of structures and art that we now create today? Hey..if I am out there, then consider me comic relief!!! Hee, hee!!! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Irish Rose -- thank you. You don't need speakers here any more; we're not allowed to post music. Sven -- you could be right (ha, ha). Thank you. amusemi -- If you think you're out on a limb, it's probably because I'm out there too; this is total deconstruction to me. But it was fun. I'm glad you liked it. [This message has been edited by mirror man (12-23-2001 06:12 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
mirror man, if this is babel you should build a tower to it. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderful use of language and phrasing MirrorMan ... I enjoyed the images and sounds this brought to my mind.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Kethry -- then I will continue to babble on. Thank you. Kit -- thank you. And Merry Christmas to you also. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
nicely done--enjoyed There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
maybe it's just your secret love of wooden structures that got you to create this imagery?? Nicely said. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Jamie -- thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ecrivan -- Yes, I do like wooden structures. But I honestly don't know what this means; if I didn't remember writing it, I wouldn't own it. To me, this reads like a pile of junk. I didn't mean to confuse anyone, and I'll watch for this sort of thing in the future. Thank you. [This message has been edited by mirror man (12-27-2001 03:17 AM).] |
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