Open Poetry #17 |
Net Twelve days of Christmas - Is this ok it has eleven smilies in it? |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Net Twelve days of Christmas. On the first day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Her home dot com and email addy On the second day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the third day of Christmas My net friend sent to me Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the fourth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the fifth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the sixth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the seventh day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Seven cutsie graphics Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the eighth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Eight angels winging Seven cutsie graphics Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the ninth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Nine sites commercial Eight angels winging Seven cutsie graphics Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the tenth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Ten bright screen savers Nine sites commercial Eight angels winging Seven cutsie graphics Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the eleventh day of Christmas my net friend sent to me Eleven smilie faces Ten bright screen savers Nine sites commercial Eight angels winging Seven cutsie graphics Six heartbreak chain mails Five virus checkers Four virtual cards Three mp3's Two enormous jokes And her home dot com and email addy On the twelfth day of Christmas my net friend sent to me A worm … Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (12-21-2001 10:36 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lynne! This is just too cute! I love it! ...and it does have eleven smilies hehehe! *Happy Holidays* ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul, I DID NOT SEND YOU A WORM, don't tell fibs. Besides I'm not your net friend am I? I'm your skin and blister, (cockney rhyming slang for sister) I sent you a hoax warning, the directions to remove worms and some other stuff but I didn't send you the worm. That came from almost anyone else. Now darling girl would I do that? Well, yes you know I would. I had it why shouldn't you suffer too? And don't think you can get out of it by offering to give me your quota of smilies either, it won't wash. Wonderful writing, and naturally I sent the nice things, because I'm a good girl I am. Yes I am just ask .... Ermmmm almost anyone. Well you know I try to be good, even if I don't always succeed. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTF...Kethry, a lot of cutting and pasting going on, I can tell, but priceless, and so appropos for the times... You, my dear one, are Priceless! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kethry, This is sooo cute Thank you for sharing Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
How imaginative, this is sooooooo sweet, (( smiles )) strbbux |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - this is just excellent. What a lovely Christmas writing... BC |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very clever, Kethry girl! Looks like you got some kind of net friend there |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ What a *giggler* ... And look at MizMushyMarshaLove defend herself~ She's quite the little viral (NOT virile Marsha) star isn't she~ WONDERFULLY done, sweet poetess~ Happy Holidays~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh my gosh this is a good one. An absolute delight to read. **Hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
CUTE CUTE AND MORE CUTE!!!!!!!! Very clever, Keth....I loved it. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kethry, Nothing beats being inspired by reality! Very clever. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Enchantress, Thanks...I did warn you about the smilies. Marsha, For Christmas you are getting from me...apoplexy Sunshine, thanks for laughing... I did cut and paste how else do I get it into the forum. But I also typed and rewrote to make the words fit. If I am priceless, it is because the tags won't stick. rosepetals, thanks - I'm always happy to share, especially the worm... strbbux, and you are sooo special - Thank you. Bill, it wasn't writing it was TYPING or as Sunshine says cut and paste. Thanks so much. Balladeer, yep, some kind of friend indeed. Thanks for letting me slide on the eleven smilies. Marge, I wasn't pointing the finger at her...I wasn't; but now, methinks she doth protest too much. Thanks for stopping by. Startime, I'm glad this brought you delight...after all I wouldn't want you to read this in the dark...you might strain your eyes. Madam, thanks - haven't we had the discussion on cute? I know you loved it...but did you try singing it...It's a killer. Larry, Thank you - I had a reality check once...it bounced. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the ending is hilarious..thanx for the smile.. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Keth - I was singing this aloud at my computer when I was reading it. My singing was so bad though, that my monitor cracked. I think you now owe me a new monitor. I really liked your rendition of the twelve days of Christmas, it definitely put me in a holiday mood. Very amusing. Dave |
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