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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-21 05:20 PM

Snow falls around me as frosted breath swirls.
Crunching feet echoing against the silence.
A trail of prints leading into the distant woods.
Serene calm surrounds me as each step taken.

A tear gathers with a melted flake, trailing down.
A chilled heart with ache, beating a soulful sound.
White bows sadly bend as if knowing the pining.
A mind silently trying to mend, ever reminding.

A trail of lonely moments continues into eternity.
Disturbing only the silence, walking infinitely.
A mill stream below a bridge beckoning lovers.
Frozen till the Spring thaw, only then recovers.

Now a drought of tears, my soul marches here.
Only in the dark the shadow of another clear.
Sleep brings out the ache, fills the stream dry.
Till then...not a sole tear will again damp an eye

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-21 05:53 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is such a beautifully bittersweet expression! I wish for spring to forever shine in your heart and sing with the murmurs of loves joy and tears of joy! (sigh) Your talent always amazes me, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-12-21 06:47 PM

Yes I agree with Noah!! Everyone is talking about snow, it's making me miss NY! My christmas is going to be hot here in florida : )

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-12-21 08:52 PM

Magnus - very compelling write... Nicely done, the read flows smoothly and the words just right...

BC

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-12-21 08:54 PM

This is a wonderful write, very emotional and beautiful.
Sandra

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2001-12-21 08:55 PM

"White bows sadly bend as if knowing the pining."
I love your lines, a really beautiful poem. strbbux

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-12-21 09:42 PM

*sigh* this brought back wonderful memories of walking through the words and enjoying the silence. I would love someday to share that kind of silence with someone. I love this poem. It is tender and touches the heart. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-12-21 11:02 PM

Noah...thank you for your warm reply...Always
refreshing...always honest...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-12-21 11:04 PM

RP...thanx...break out the suntan oil...and
put on the suit....go for it...cause here in
SC it isn't much different right now...

Thank You...

And I enjoyed the collaboration..was fun

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-12-21 11:05 PM

Bill....I had to dig into the books for a
few creative thoughts...thanx...yes..I
felt it flowed fairly well also...

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