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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi, everyone!! I need some help/input on what to write in the chorus. 'Cause I just can't seem to make it match the rest of the lyric... Thanks. Best Of Wishes. Brian V1: I can read it in your eyes even though you say you're fine it didn't take me long to see that there's something wrong... You say that he is the one but I can see the love's gone as you try to fake a smile... Chorus: V2: Pearls were always just your thing so if you like diamond rings then why do you cry your self to sleep every night... You say you think you're in love then you hide behind tear drops while looking in the mirror... Chorus: Instrumental break... ( Something like, All 4 one's, I Swear ) Chorus: Fade Out... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (12-21-2001 07:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're on a good start. I'd like to be of help, but my brain isn't quite functioning yet. But a boost back to the top will help keep this in view of those who may be able to assist!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
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