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Rainbow Of You
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Rainbow Of You |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Rainbow Of You If I could paint a portrait Of your never ending beauty A mixture of colors would ensue Red for your burning passion For everything you discover Orange for your humor That has a life of its own Yellow for your amazing smile That lights up my heart Blue for your quiet times Your working mind such a wonder Violet for your intelligence Always on a quest to learn more Black for the days gone by The demons that sometimes haunt White for your renewed soul That fills me with tender love The miracle of your heart Which blesses me with your love. So many colors, the rainbow of you This was inspired by A Whisper's Caress's poem Finger Painting. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-20-2001 09:34 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ This is just lovely ... a beautifully inspired piece~ Happy Holidays to you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (12-20-2001 09:35 PM).] |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
That was written wonderfuly! Thank you SO much for sharing it! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - Thank you for stopping in. Glad you liked. Zukene_Chic - Thank you for reply. I don't think I've seen your name before.. I'll have to go look up some of your poetry  . Glad you enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Tara, this is sooooo gorgeous; I read Annie's poem too and it was so breathtakingly beautiful, and your lovely words reflect such breathtaking rainbows of love! (smiles) May rainbows forever shine from your heart of joy, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
this is very pretty, Tara. I'm blue, the color of the sea and sky, but my mood is that of green, something every living, growing, renewing itself with every Spring. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The miracle of your heart Which blesses me with your love. So many colors, the rainbow of you' Beautiful write, Tara...a wonderful tour of every aspect of a person...fantastic work! I really enjoyed this! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Rosepetals - Very good. The last stanza was a perfect way to end it. Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Thank you for you kind reply. I always look forward to seeing them Michael - Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.snowpants - Thank you for such nice comments I'm happy you enjoyed it |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - I missed ya there! You snuck in on me  I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping in."My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
well, honey, your rainbow is fairly astonishing too, you know. soon enough i will get enough free time to come back and devote a bit to the boards here, rather than being so tied down at work and school, and then you're really in for it. wonderful, as always, my dear. -The Only True Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave - Thank you for coming in. My colors pale in comparrison to yours my dear. I love you babe "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
rosepetals25- What a beautiful write this is. Really enjoyed it. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tara, Wish I had thought of that! Cute. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Vicky - Thank you for stopping in.. I'm glad you enjoyed Larry - I'm happy you liked it Thanks for visiting "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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