Open Poetry #17 |
This is defenitely not my day |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is defenitely not my day As I will be so honest to say First I didn't understand Marge's rhyme But the 'Halo'problem is solved by her in time Then I searched for a challenge of Poet deVine At last she had to send me the URL and she did fine My eyes never stopped at the Challengeforum you know Oh my Oh my that's another one I frequently must go I wrote a poem to her challenge and posted it along But clicked on 'new topic' instead of 'reply', so wrong Well I finally figured it all out in my head This lady should have long time ago gone to bed I'll see you tomorrow or whatever the day might be For I won't go to work till january 2nd you see So before I'm messing up this entire site too I'll say Good Night and Happy Dreams to you LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ You little doll you~ You delight us so ... get a good night's rest and return on the rise of sun~ For a poet friend like you - should never come un-done~ Love ya', gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh dear Titia. It must be very late for you. What a day you have had. I hope you have pleasant dreams and wake up refreshed to tackle all the new challenges tomorrow will bring. As my grandfather used to say, “night, night, sleep tight, don’t let the bed bugs bite”. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Having one of those days, huh? Yep, best to go to bed then before you do some real damage! Good one, Titia. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sweet dreams, Tita. And, MERRY CHRISTMAS! |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
We all have those daze, Titia! Sleep well... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Titia - have had many of these type of days also... Merry Christmas to you and yours... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
It's nice to know you will get to have a break...I know those kind of days very well. Merry Christmas....**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh titia I've had those kinds of days too. Nice write.Merry Christmas to you. strbbux |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Very explicit and understandable writing. Great use of rhyming too. I so much enjoyed reading this. What a great piece of diary. Roger |
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