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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-12-20 05:40 PM



The aura, which surrounds the thought of you
turns mist within my eyes a lavender blue
The aura of your lips puckering upon mine
torturous without your warm lips to dine
Sharing love, within the bedroom of my mind
sip of my goblet, let me quench your thirst
Tenderly squeeze me like a grape
until sweet juices within me burst
Can I entangle you in the cluster of my vines?
breathless within fruits of passionate wine
Sip of loves bouquet, upon the stem of night
feeding your hunger, your dessert in moonlight
Feel my skin, my auburn mane to ruby toes
Savor me like a grape, taste of my afterglow.



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1 posted 2001-12-20 05:41 PM


seems we are both feeling colorful today...
really beautiful Victoria.

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2 posted 2001-12-20 05:46 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...this is such a beautiful sonnet, sweet friend, I love it!!! (smiles) May you forever sip the wine of true eternal love with the love of your life happily! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is so colorfully passionate! I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-20 08:00 PM


Hmm I think I must go open my bottle of Merlot now. This is great, Vic, I love using wine in my poems.
Happy Chrismas
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-12-20 09:30 PM


Victoria~
Loving these thoughts~

'within the bedroom of my mind'

Yeah !

Happy Holidays to you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-12-20 09:56 PM


Annie..thank you for peeking in today..appreciate your comments..

Noah..always nice to hear from you sweet guy

Sandra..thank you..miss you..hope you have a merry christmas with your grandchildren..hugs

Marge..Thank you for visiting...always love hearing from you...hugs

                      ~Victoria~

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