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Dolor
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Isaiah Junior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 15Atlanta,Ga |
This is hard to poetize- The tears dripping down my face It's vague to you but my paradox is a dolor place This is hard to poetize- My strain from all the pressure It's hazy to you but I don't expect you to make it better It's always been like this, and I can't tell you why I can only poetize it and give you my heart-felt reply It's just the way a life sometimes is in this world of false hope I can't tell you why, but only devise of ways to cope This is hard to poetize but I'vedone my best to eloquently express the grief in this brief dolor poem of stress -Isaiah |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Well, I think you've expressed your sorrow very well and thank you for teaching me a new word today. I look it up in Webster's just to be sure. Very nicely done even though the sadness is evident. Cheryl |
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