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It Hurts so Much Inside
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It Hurts so Much Inside |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
" It Hurts so Much Inside " © 2001 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved V1: Sitting alone in my room looking out the window, watching the pouring rain hit the empty street below. Thinking back on when we shared our very first kiss, on a warm summer day those are the moments I miss... C: It Hurts So Much Inside I thought I could over come this, It Hurts So Much Inside set adrift on memory bliss... V2: Promises and memories are locked inside my head, I still dream about you now why can't I just forget. All the times that we had together you and me, on the warm sumemer days all the last moment heart beats... C: It Hurts So Much Inside I thought I could over come this, It Hurts So Much Inside set adrift on memory bliss... V1: Sitting alone in my room looking out the window, watching the pouring rain hit the empty street below. C: It Hurts So Much Inside I thought I could over come this, It Hurts So Much Inside set adrift on memory bliss... [This message has been edited by Hallucination (12-19-2001 10:19 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like this a lot, Brian! It sounds like it would be a beautiful song.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
WOW! Brian, these are some excellent lyrics! I soon want to be able to write like this. This could turn out to be an excellent song! I could see it now. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is incredible. I, too, want to be a songwriter but I need improvement. Good luck to you |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi guys, I'm really glad that you like it as much as you do, And this is why I do what I do. For other people to enjoy to read what i write as much as I enjoy to write it. And hopefully someday all the hard work and struggeling hours will pay of. Thanks Best Of wishes to you all... Brian (Sorry for any spelling errors) |
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